Can you please update this story, I read this story ages ago. and I just re-read it. And I was wanting to read the next chapter.

Hey

I just came across your story and am really intrigued as to how it will end. Will you be updating it at all? I can see its been a while.

Just stumbled upon this one, totally wish you would have continued it!

I've been enjoying this story! Please update soon!

great job...it made me cry...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Rivitting. Can't wait to see what is next.

wow, i had to read everything over again... lol... is a beautiful story so i don't mind that much ;) but please make some type of update sooner so i don't have to re-read everything everytime you update, lol... is 16 chapters long ;) i totally understand about life and hope that everything gets through quickly so i can read more of this amazing story...

2 questions and a clarification: i speak and read spanglish, so that been said! did i miss something conserning laura or her joining the fbi? and what is exactly the relationship between grissom and sara, are they already together... like a real couple or are they still taking it slow? thanks! just wondering if maddie will have a brother o sister in a future ;)

more please

is there any more?

hey i love the story please keep going...please...ill keep looking forward to the next updates.

PLEASE keep going you have gotten the characters so right in this story i can't wait to read more! cheryl

A fantastic story! Your style is consistant, and easy to read. The characters, though they don't act like they would on the show, are still believable. Can't wait for an update!

Great chapter. Worth the wait.

hey i just have to say that your story is amazing i can't wait for the next chapter you make me get so engrossed in the story i forget what time it is. lol.

love it