 SnowLeopard7 12/30/06 . chapter 9Man, this is one of the best developed Gundam Seed fics I've seen on this website. To bad that it seems like you don't plan to continue the it, its been over a year since you updated. Hopefully, you'll, eventually, be inspired to work on this story once again. |
 azna-azure 11/21/05 . chapter 9kill me for just finding this fic_ (bad azna-chan! bad!)
Ahem...it's a one awesome fic. I wonder why you didn't get it updated until now. Hope it wasn't because you wanna stop. Please don't stop! ne? ne?
I'll be waiting for an update until someone come and kill me. Please? please? |
 justsome1 5/1/05 . chapter 9 hmm one of the greatest fanfics.. i wonder y u don't score more reviews.
in short, i love ur fic very much. pls update soon :) |
 bloodyknight85 4/27/05 . chapter 9Keep up the good work... Update sooN! |
 asga 4/27/05 . chapter 9update lol |
 Shadow Chaser 4/27/05 . chapter 9Yet another great chapter. The ball is slowly, but surely moving faster and faster down the hill. Great job. _
Looking foward for more! |
 Unmei 4/11/05 . chapter 8 Hmm, it appears Athrun's in the clear right now, but I think I'll wait and see what the future holds before I think all is well. As always this was an excellent chapter. I look forward to more and keepup the great work. |
 frostlight 4/3/05 . chapter 3This fanfic is an eye-opener. I don't need to tell you what you already know and what many others before me have told you. Am currently in Chapter three and liking very much what you have written. Please do continue to update. |
 Neptune47 3/28/05 . chapter 8Yay, update!
So who was Ayame's teacher? And Athrun's extracted, but surely not off the hook just yet. I loved the Kira, Yzak, Dearka exchange, by the way! I can't wait for more! |
 Neptune47 3/24/05 . chapter 7Yay! Another fascinating chapter. I'm just loving this story. I can tell it's going to be great! |
 emberin 3/18/05 . chapter 7This is awesome! Although I'm currently slightly confused, I'm sure I'll catch on better later on.
I like all the description given in the story. It makes the story go at a steady pace between action and build-up. To wish I could write like this... the characters are well thought out, and the plot really makes a person stop and think about it.
I hate to bug you for this, knowing how hard it is to do it fast, but PLEASE PUT UP A CHAPTER SOON! |
 lazy-authoress 3/11/05 . chapter 6 great story.
i feel bad that i can't make stories like this! after all, gundam IS about politics, battles... that kind of stuff. i wish i knew how to write thought-provoking, intriguing, witty and (looks for another word in trusty thesaurus) stimulating story such as these.
well, self-pitying aside...
your chapters are well planned out: the change of scene, the character portrayal, everything. aside from a few typographical errors, i can't find anything else to criticize.
story-wise, i think that this is very intriguing and how a gundam fic should be. thanks a lot for the chance to read and review your fic.
though i know how hard it is, i must insist: please upload soon!
*ZAFT SALUTE!* |
 Unmei 3/11/05 . chapter 6 Nice chapter! I liked this one. Poor Athrun what is he going to do. Well, keep up the great work and I look forward to your next update. |
 Shadow Chaser 3/4/05 . chapter 5ME!
AH! You can't leave it at that! Must have more! Must find out!
Btw, I love your battle sequences! They're really well written and all the characters that are introduced are throughly fleshed out in just four chapters and one prologue. So...political intrigue abound.
Isn't political intrigue fun to mess with? I think so... Anyways, great job and I hope to read more chapters soon! Going on favorites and author alert list! _
Btw, there are some SEED: Destiny references in here aren't there? Are there going to be any SEED: Destiny characters or just references to them?
-Shadow Chaser |
 artgirl150 3/3/05 . chapter 5 this was another awsoem chapter please keep up the great work and update soon. I also hope that there will be scenes with Athrun in them in the next chapter, and you will reveal more of the reasons Athrun was kidnapped. |