A couple of things about this fic confused me. I saw Storm creep out to the greenhouse. Okay, got it. Did Wolverine simply appear nearby? And did they magically end up back in her room? I didn't kmow what was going on. And the bit about her relationship with Forge, I felt that was thrown in my face, instead of...*shrugs*... introduced in a separate paragraph, with a little more literary flow.

I'm not trying to be a jerk, but to hopefully provide insight to a particular reader's POV. I'm all about constructive criticism.

I think I had an orgasm just reading that.

great story, you just have to write another chap its really good! :) x

wonderful. very sensual. Especially the last paragraph.

I love fics pairing Ororo and Logan together. They're two of my favorite characters. Very nice.

Very nice, indeed, but shouldn't this be rated N-17?

RO/LO forever )

Very well written..your word play is delicious and very enjoyable

loved it write more

I love it. Storm and Wolverine make a great couple. Delicious writing.

Wicked! I think storm and wolverine make the hottest couple ever! Storm is awesome and amoung the stongest and we all know she has that "love thang" for WOlverine! Sigh. Romance is hot! Erotic. Yo people should write more Storm/ Wolverine erotic stories puh-lease!

Wow! Very erotic, very exciting. I've always liked the idea of Ororo and Logan, and this just confirms that I think could be a wonderful pairing.

That was a good story.

So good! Slow and Good

WOW! is all I can say!

Great Story! I'm still wiping the steam from my computer screen. Oh, my...that was a great story! Any plans for a part 2?