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| I Dont Know 2005-04-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseCom'on Do Chris' POV!! PLEASE! |
| IcantthinkofaFnick 2005-04-04 ch 4,  | abuseThat was very sweet!! |
| Jenny 2005-04-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseAww...for two things one:the little thankyou and two: this chappie, it was GREAT! I love the way you decided to share everyone's POV on Chris's death. O and guess what...I made sure there were no sad songs playing this time..LOL! =D Lovely chappie! =) |
| ChrisBianca 2005-04-03 ch 4, | abuseHere I go again, I think I cry on every chapter. You are such a talented author, you are really talented. I mean, you only write little chapters, but yet you put big tears in my eyes. Keep up the excellent work and update soon. Don't give up, keep on going. Your doing so well. |
| Jenny 2005-03-31 ch 3, anon. | abuseSorry...reviews at once but hey. I love the way you wrote all three and before I cry have to say this was good =D...and it doesn't help when there's a sad song playing in the background *changes the song* Great chappie...or.. chappies even |
| Jenny 2005-03-31 ch 2, anon. | abuse*sniff, sniff* Tis very heartwarming. |
| Jenny 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw...it was sweet! =) |
| Lonnie 2005-02-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt's a great story, but it should be "would have" not "would of". Your use of "would of" is annoying the holy hell out of me. |
| Icantthinkofafnick 2005-02-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was cute... I can imagine how hard it must have been for her... I just get so ** when I see the new episodes and they act as if nothing has happened, like the other day there was the re run of the one Piper turns into an angel of death and they speak about the mother dying, the grandmother dying, Prue dying... and Chris? Where is Chris?? He was your son and died like a few months ago!! |
| ChrisBianca 2005-02-24 ch 2, | abuseOk, 16 lines and I am crying, I'm such a sucker for sappy stuff. please update soon, I love this story. It might just be about Chris, but it's more than what the show sympathized. Grr. You are a talented author, who knows how to put emotions down to pact. |
| PhantomElphaba 2005-02-24 ch 2, | abuseI like this. Maybe you should do chapters in Paige and Pheobe's POV's. |
| Dirty Blondes 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseOMG! i loved it! u gotta do a sequel like Piper's feeling or sumthing then paige then... u get the picture! My god its not stupid! And the whole sequels thingy... dont pay attention to me... ok i'm goin to go now and cry abit cos i really liked that... so depressing but it works... Thank u And goodnite... |
| Kilikapele 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really heartfelt! Great job. I'm so looking forward to chapter 3 of 'Completely Untitled'! :) Thanks, Kiki :D |
| ChrisBianca 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was really good! It could've been longer, but I guess I could ask for a sequel. Bye! |
| Dream-sorcerous11 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Seems that it shows the feelings of Leo...so you did a good job there and the poem itself flowed nicely. |