OMG I LOVE this story!! Carl is soo cute ... I can just imagine him walking areound in VH dusterlol it is such a funny picture. I lov the line at the end of the chapter about 'Mr Famous Rabbit Hunter'. weird that VH is still able to talk even though he is a wolf... but hey that's cool. I love the Wet Dog chapter that was funny. I also love your reference to ' the London Assingment' I will never forget the sight of Carl in that dress. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~Kairi's Twin~

oh I loved this! I snickered and snerked the whole way through! Just loved this dialogue!

You know, the words cure and curse aren't really that far apart...lol.

Great story, I hope more comes out soon.

oh rabbit... ok, that just cracked me up. I love the way he is both man and wolf (though more domesticated then most)

And Carl feeling uncomfortable in the jacket - so very true. Great chapter. Hope the other fandoms don't lure you away again!

As someone who didn't want Van Helsing to be cured of his lycanthropy, I'm enjoying this very much. *grins* Very amusing!

Another very funny chapter. I loved the way VH mid sentence suddenly goes oo! rabbit and runs off, I could almost see the Wolfy grin and the tongue flopping from the side of his mouth as he runs. Please update soon.

This is wonderful! I love the twist, and you write it well. Please continue!

Did Van helsing stick his nose in Carl's ear? I laughed so hard... yes keep it up!

ugh! stuck all night with a large, wet, smelly dog. that is hell. I've done it and its VERY unpleasant.

Still, I'm not so sure friar robes smell any better when wet...

Great job! You have caught the relationship between Carl and Van Helsing perfectly (in my opinion). Keep it up!

I do have one question, though. How can Van Helsing talk as a wolf? A wolf's mouth structure is quite different from a humans, and I don't think a wolf could be as quite as articulate as your character is.

Don't worry about it! I am enjoying this too much!

"What...what do you think the Cardinal will say when he sees you?'

'"That Van Helsing, whatta nice-a young man, he deserves a raise-a."'

This bit got me some very funny looks at work when I sat and nearly choked when my drink went down the wrong way from laughing with a mouth full. Keep em coming.

hehehe so what is the pity for the map ^^

heeheehee...I can just see Carl riding all the way back to Rome with a huge black wolf trotting next to him, offering snarky commentary...

Hi, I'm a new reader. This story is so sweet and funny, I love it. I like the way Carl and Gabriel interact with each other you have recreated the feeling I got about their relationship from the film. I have added the story to my author alert list so I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I was bursting a spleen over these ones:



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The mental picture of Van Helsing's chin on Carl's knee, and the friar's scratching the wolf's ear has got to be a truly endearing touch. ^_^