 Psycho Tangerine 2009-07-22 . chapter 6I like this so far. I'll keep reading. |
 welleg 2007-09-23 . chapter 19This was a fabulous story. I really enjoyed reading it. |
 Silent DJ 2006-08-24 . chapter 19Wow. Great fic. I can't wait to read the sequel now =) |
 Just some person 2006-07-28 . chapter 19Alright, this is the second time I read it. Which is good, because I reread stories I really, really liked. And, this was one of those stories I really, really liked. It was great, really, full of emotion, happiness, sorrow, and everything. I could understand all the points you were trying to make at parts. And, the last chapter was so sweet, really. Honestly, this really was an excellent story from a great writer!
~Rachel |
 Gear's Girl 2006-02-03 . chapter 19that was beautiful. |
 Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2005-12-20 . chapter 19Aw! Great story! Good job! *tear* I miss wes! And I can SO see Sky getting his personality from his mom! Jen and him are Soo alike its scary! |
 Ghostwriter 2005-09-23 . chapter 19What a wonderful story. Though I never followed Time Force, I feel that you did a great job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 Sreym 2005-09-05 . chapter 19The ending was really great, very sad which is awesome :) Loved the whole story, it was all done so well and everyone pretty much stayed in character. Didn't like the 9/11 reference in the last one, though. Loved the last chapter. Great work. |
 The Original Space Cadet 2005-09-04 . chapter 19Wow, this story is amazing! I'd read bits and pieces of it but never imagined it to be this good! It was so addictive I read it the whole way through!
You do seem to suddenly insert characters into scenes without any mention of them being there before, like when Boom is in the hospital with Wes, but that's the only thing you need to work on.
Awesome job! |
 MagCat 2005-09-02 . chapter 19 Sorry i've been away, but I finished readin' this and I loved it; 'cept when u killed Wes... but i guess i see why u had to do it... put up the sequel soon! |
 saiai-chan 2005-09-01 . chapter 19aw...it's tha end...T.T
i look forward to the sequel!
*still in tears from wes's death* T.T
white time ranger, you did really well on this fic. i love how you combined all the elements of a good story together so well. |
 Silver Warrior 2005-08-30 . chapter 19I can’t believe you killed Wes. I can hardly wait for the sequel. |
 SarahTheScoundrel 2005-08-29 . chapter 19sad but a great story. I cant wait for the sequel. |
 BloomingViolets 2005-08-29 . chapter 19OMG! *cries* noo... WES!!
I'm kinda sad that this story is already at an end.. it was so good!
The part where Jen told Sky about the first night she spent with Wes was funny "Oh yuck, don't tell me that!" *giggles* great line!!
I'm looking forward to the sequel, so get it out soon! |
 TheDreamerLady 2005-08-28 . chapter 19*blinks*
but he should stay dead! I don't want zombie's running around! *shivers* I'd be scary... and freaky!
I wanna read the story anyway, but...
amanda and Lanco(the duck) |