wow! I love Ged and Tenar; no wait, I love the unsaid love between them.

This is a truly beautiful piece. I'm really lost for words...

Well, the one piece of constructive advice I would offer is this: Maybe you should make Tenar's character a little more like Arha. After all, Tenar WAS Arha before, and darkness never fades away completely.

According to my analyzing,Arha usually gets frustrated, then angry, when something happens that she has no power to stop.

Anyhow, whatever the reasons, I think you should make Tenar's personality and actions a little more bitter. You could either edit this piece, or make a new story. :) Keep up the good work! (Gee, now I sound like a teacher...)

I've read a few of your stories and I've seen your devart account, and ya know I haven't seen anyone with as much talent for writing (and drawing) as you in like ... ever! I love the way you made Tenar so innocent and fragile.

Hope you write more Earthsea stuff soon!

Oh, that was lovely. There are few one-shots quiteas amazing, and no earthsea ones! I haven't read it for ages, but I might go back and read the Tombs of Atuan again (if I can even find it, of course.)

This is amazing - it's so good! Love it. Well done!

I'm so very glad that there are people out there who can still write Earthsea Fanfiction (Yes, I know this is a little late, forgive me), and whose minds haven't been numbed by the Sci-Fi production. Lovely fic.

That was a really good story! You captured their feelings well, and you're writing style is awesome. Keep up the good work!

Its very well written - still next time I see angst on a piece I think I'll give it a miss! My only problem with it is I think Tenar is stronger than you seem to give her credit for here.

Beautiful story. You captured the two of them perfectly. Thanks for a great fic!

It's so beautiful, I almost cried. Thanks for a great story.

Beautifull, I thought that was lovely insight you expresed there.

I loved your way with words too.I'm all sad now though lol

Well done luv,

Lady F

That is lovely! And very much what I thought their relationship to be/develop into! Are you planning on more or is this a one shot? Either way, a splendidly done story that shows an excellent command of book knowledge and dynamics. Well, well done!