...I read a ridiculous amount of fanfiction. A lot of poorly written fanfiction...but that was amazing! I read the entire thing in one sitting and I kept biting my nails for more! I am a huge RyuxTatsuha fan and it's so hard to find fanfiction that goes into their relationships and how hard the rest of NG would go to keep Tatsuha away from Ryu, you did an awesome job! Definatly top of my favourite list~! Thank you for writing such an awesome story :D

So. I'm simultaneously squealing right now, and trying to keep my little sister from seeing what's so cute.

This was incredible. Everything about it was just really well-done. I love Yoshi...Ryuichi. XD Your Tatsuha's great too. Everyone was really in-character and fun.

And as always, your writing is flawless.

I LOVE YOU SO BAD.

-laughs and hides under chair-

"In the doorway, Eiri shook his head in disapproval. He lit another cigarette." That line had me laughing very hard, and that's saying something because I strongly dislike Yuki. I just thought that was amusing.

ANYWAYS!

Very good story. I liked the plot behind it, definitely. The only thing I would suggest was maybe drawing out the ending a little...giving them a little more characterization and not wrapping it up so quickly. Other than that, great job!

I loved that story! It was awesome! It was a whole different spin on those two and how they go together. I loved the way you portrayed both Ryu and Tatsuha. I had a hard time stopping when i started reading even just for food and rest. So yeah. Loved it. :D

wooh what astory lol
very nice love the ending!

aw! that was soo cute! *hugs* i love you!

God!that wuz Great!Good Work!What wuz tha website u posted tha full version on?,pleez!i gotta know:o

that was funny sad and beautiful

this was awesome! i can't believe that everyone is so protective of tatsuha, i like how you described ryuichi, very nice. their is not much stories focusing on tatsuha;s life and feelings...or i think their isn't...but yeah i really like this.

This fic put me through a REALLY ENJOYABLE rollarcoaster ride.
Is Aneki actually a word'? Or was it supposed to be aniki?
Anyway, very very touching..

I absolutely adore your characterizations, especially ryuichi's. I too believe the kiddie persona is a game. What 31 year old MAN acts like that. Thank you so much for writing this.

this is a good story keep it up!

Wow~!! =^^=
I really liked how the story went... I couldn't stop reading it! XD
Really great! I loved it!

... Holy **, that ** ruled! This is going on my favorites, your going on my Author Alert-Favorite Author- and Story Alert list, and I think I just read the greatest Gravitation FanFic out there!

I read your other story as well but was too tired to comment. But this was just... Oh Sweet Lord. O_O I LOVE YOU! XD

You will be in Heaven! I swear it goddamnit! Not to mention I've read more damn stories of Gravitation that my brain is probably fried. But you are loved nonetheless. Congradulations, your amazing.

That was so cute! -cuddles tat and ryu dolls-

Off to read more of you fikkies :p
Hope they're as good as this one!!

Ana, the MCLover!!
and a fan!!