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The Sequestered Princess
2006-09-18
ch 14,
abuseYOU HURT MY MAN! I WILL KILL YOU WITH MY ADAMANTIUM COATED CLAWS YOU EVIL PERSON! Dez, be quiet. It's just a stupid story. But it is still a very good stupid story. (Having multiple personalities kinda sucks sometimes.) EXCEPT SHE HURT LOGAN! Calm down. He'll heal. I liked it - Dez didn't. CAN YOU BLAME ME??!? I said calm down! That is all. Keep writing! HEAL HIM NOW!! Dez! Shut up!
The Sequestered Princess
2006-06-30
ch 13,
abuseVery good! And, to tell you the truth, I was kinda upset about X3 as well - where the heck was Kurt? At least they FINALLY fixed Ororo's hair...
Heath
2006-06-04
ch 13, anon.
abuseInteresting stuff you have here. It's amazing how you are able to portray all the characters so well with very little description. You have a great talent with dialogue.
adamantiumclawz
2006-01-08
ch 12, anon.
abusedude i think i amin luv with this fanfic so i had a few ?'s ias wondering if melody is evil?? besides tht everything else looks and sounds ASTONISHING ^_^
BJvision
2006-01-03
ch 12,
abuseGlad to see you around for 2006. Great chapter hoping to see some action soon with this Mutant X character. And will Jean figure out what Nathaniel has told Scott.

Can't wait for the next chapter
xxPastelSTARxx
2005-09-21
ch 11,
abuse:o so much drama! keep it up; i love drama ;)

you must really like twinkies since it's mentioned so much in this story and the one before it >_o
The Sequestered Princess
2005-09-19
ch 11,
abuseO, tis be Remy! My two men be gracing this fic now! :P Loved the Logan/Kurt/Scott spat. It reminded me of a male ** fight XD
Wen1
2005-09-17
ch 11,
abuseI'm sure, it's Scott's chilld but Essex wanted him out of his way
CARRY ON !
JOTT FOREVER
Wen
BJvision
2005-09-16
ch 11,
abuseWell Gambit has joined the woodworks now but why does Sinister want Scott now especially since he was the one that told him aboput Jean being pregnant for someone else.

Great chapter cant wait for the next
The Sequestered Princess
2005-09-11
ch 10,
abuseI'm gunna kill that flamin' moron Summers for blasting my hubbie!
nassica
2005-08-10
ch 10, anon.
abusekeep it comming fast
Liljean15690
2005-08-09
ch 10,
abuseme love
i want to hit scott for blasting logan
BJvision
2005-08-09
ch 10,
abuseDamn Scott thinks Logan had sex with Jean. You and your cliffhangers. The bantering earlier in the chapter was well done.
Darlin
2005-07-10
ch 9,
abuseThough I don't read Jott sotries and only read this because of the summary mentioning the white haired woman whom I assumed was Stormy, I enjoyed this story a lot. Very well written.
Wen1
2005-07-07
ch 9,
abuseoh man,
Carry on !
it's hard to ask for JOTT FOREVER now lol
Wen
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