 SkywardShadow 2009-05-18 . chapter 1That was purely amazing. It's always been interesting how all of the well-known teams throughout the generations seem like copies of each other, and you wrote about them perfectly.
Very deep, and kind of haunting. Spectacularly done. |
 tanith-4486 2007-12-29 . chapter 1nice |
 BlackDove-alchemist 2007-11-30 . chapter 1Wow, this is really thoughtful. It's written really well, and I like it. One thing I can't figure out is if the spiral is going out and geting better every time, or if it's getting worse every time. Do you know the answer? |
 chibibaka1 2007-08-14 . chapter 1Beautiful ^-^ |
 Relala 2007-01-18 . chapter 1Nearly all of your fics make me cry. But they;re so AWESOME! |
 Artimes Athene 2006-11-13 . chapter 1that story rocked you should make a sequal |
 Halo Slip 2006-08-19 . chapter 1This is lovely work. Great job. =) |
 Spazzcat-The-Neji-Glomper 2006-07-28 . chapter 1very cool! |
 yamimagic 2006-07-18 . chapter 1Really, I'm in no coherent shape to be placing a review of anything, let alone such a wonderful fic as this, but I figured I'll at least post any first opinions.
As I've said, this fanfic is wonderful, as well as highly smile-inducing. I just about cried while reading the portion about Yondaime, not only because it's Yondaime and I love him, but because you've made a character who is hardly shown in cannon-verse into something real (or at least as real as any fictional character can become). For this and more, I commend you.
But, as I've said, I am in no coherent state, and thus, I pray you can at least understand some of this. Again, this is a wonderful fic, and you're going on my favorites list now. :) |
 RJPC 2006-06-30 . chapter 1WOW thats AWESOME this is REAlly GREAT !!:):):):)
~solitarywarrior |
 ElasticBobaTurtle 2006-05-23 . chapter 1The characters and their stories are so skillfully tied together here; you make the differences and the simliarities so apparent. Wonderful work, and again, beautiful portrayal of the characters. |
 RiverDoe 2006-03-21 . chapter 1whoa, gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous. I love the bit about Kakashi avoiding becoming a teacher the most. Beautiful. |
 Kitsune no Yuuki 2006-02-24 . chapter 1that is really good! i read one like this but this was done much better! |
 wellduh... 2005-11-16 . chapter 1 Wodnerful. Wow. I love how it all seems connected, in that weird way of history repeating itself. |
 Jen 2005-11-13 . chapter 1 Wow, really love how you compare all those ninja teams and that despite their different generations, they all are so alike. In a way, its kinda sad too, the happiness and the pain. Really good work. |