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SkywardShadow
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
That was purely amazing. It's always been interesting how all of the well-known teams throughout the generations seem like copies of each other, and you wrote about them perfectly.
Very deep, and kind of haunting. Spectacularly done.
tanith-4486
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
nice
BlackDove-alchemist
2007-11-30 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really thoughtful. It's written really well, and I like it. One thing I can't figure out is if the spiral is going out and geting better every time, or if it's getting worse every time. Do you know the answer?
chibibaka1
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
Beautiful ^-^
Relala
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
Nearly all of your fics make me cry. But they;re so AWESOME!
Artimes Athene
2006-11-13 . chapter 1
that story rocked you should make a sequal
Halo Slip
2006-08-19 . chapter 1
This is lovely work. Great job. =)
Spazzcat-The-Neji-Glomper
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
very cool!
yamimagic
2006-07-18 . chapter 1
Really, I'm in no coherent shape to be placing a review of anything, let alone such a wonderful fic as this, but I figured I'll at least post any first opinions.

As I've said, this fanfic is wonderful, as well as highly smile-inducing. I just about cried while reading the portion about Yondaime, not only because it's Yondaime and I love him, but because you've made a character who is hardly shown in cannon-verse into something real (or at least as real as any fictional character can become). For this and more, I commend you.

But, as I've said, I am in no coherent state, and thus, I pray you can at least understand some of this. Again, this is a wonderful fic, and you're going on my favorites list now. :)
RJPC
2006-06-30 . chapter 1
WOW thats AWESOME this is REAlly GREAT !!:):):):)

~solitarywarrior
ElasticBobaTurtle
2006-05-23 . chapter 1
The characters and their stories are so skillfully tied together here; you make the differences and the simliarities so apparent. Wonderful work, and again, beautiful portrayal of the characters.
RiverDoe
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
whoa, gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous. I love the bit about Kakashi avoiding becoming a teacher the most. Beautiful.
Kitsune no Yuuki
2006-02-24 . chapter 1
that is really good! i read one like this but this was done much better!
wellduh...
2005-11-16 . chapter 1
Wodnerful. Wow. I love how it all seems connected, in that weird way of history repeating itself.
Jen
2005-11-13 . chapter 1
Wow, really love how you compare all those ninja teams and that despite their different generations, they all are so alike. In a way, its kinda sad too, the happiness and the pain. Really good work.
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