Beautiful. Simply beatuful. I actually teared up even though RinxKakashi isn't one of my favorite couples. (That's a compliment!! :D) This is probably the only oneshot I've read that I don't have some kind of issue with XD. I was wondering if I could use some of Rin's lines in my own fanfic, with a credit to you in the A/N of course. More precicely, "Good things do happen, Kakashi. It's not all blood and loss," and "It can't be, or the stars wouldn't shine," with a word altered here and there. If you do grant me permission, it would be greatly appreciated! Keep writing, I'd love to

Very honest, very real - this piece was achingly beautiful.

which part of the anime does it show kakashi gaiden?

i liked it yay! for kaka/rin

So sad and sweet! I like your stories!

OMG great fic! i really loved it. :-)

heii that was reli good! aww poor Kakashi!! XD

*gives cookie* u deserve that and more!!

Oh, this is so sad. But I'm happy to have read some GOOD Rin/Kakashi for once. Instant fave.

This was just...amazing. It was wonderfully emotional, but not too over the top. I was nearly in tears at the end. It really makes you wonder just what happened to Rin and how it affected Kakashi. What was their relationship before Rin died/disappeared? Man, I really want to know.

You wrote this perfectly. You got every action down. And everything made complete sense. Great job with this.

I read it twice. It's just... exeptional. Choice of words, tension, softness, sorrow. One of the best fanfics I've ever ever read. I call that style of describing 'close' - as you pay attention to single touch, heartbeat, breath, and that's what works on me the best. Ah, I really wanted to write something constructive for you, but all the words just fled *sniffs*
However! I'm still not convinces to the pairing, from my own stupid, selfish reasons. But... You really did great work. I wish there were more such mature ficks.

Aw that was beautiful and so sad :( Great job :)

Aw, that was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I don't think words can describe just how much I love this. If you're not already on my Favorite Authors list, you're definitely going there~

This, like the rest of your fics, blows me away. Brilliant piece of writing, so poignant and so heartfelt. At the beginning, it was nice, the kind of heart-warming feeling that made me want to melt, but at the end, it was a dull ache that somehow really hurts.

This is... I think you've got all kind of superlatives directed for your fics already. Just want to let you know that I'm also one of your fans :).

Aw... Poor Kakashi...

so heartbreaking...