After reading Unspoken I wanted to read your other works and it brought this up. It's very cute. However, your writing in Unspoken, is leaps and bounds from this still very nice story. You are a great emotive writer and this was a very good story and I can see alot of the ground work and premise for Unspoken all throughout. It's nice to see an author grow in her talent. Thank you for such a great read. And thank you also for Unspoken. Until Next Time.

nice! thumbs up!! yawn so tired!

*sigh*
I just love a happy ending. I was kind of worried there that the title might be suggesting that it meant perhaps another time for Sephy.
Yay!

Wow. This was really good. I really liked it. At first I thought it was going to be too rushed, but it really worked out in the end. Great job on this. You're really very good. ^_^

There is some typos (three or so I think in this chap, and some sentences just weren't really necessary. As an example, I did not feel that "in a cute fashion", the fragrance "of a warrior" an such direct opinion (true or not) put the reader much at ease. It feel a little like being directed what to like and what to dislike. A last thing ; I found the ending a little simple at my whinny fan opinion. ^^"
Notwithstanding, I'm writing that now, but I don't doubt a second that since the year yo last edited this fiction and till our beloved Unspoken, much time (2 yeas if I am correct) have passed, and your skills, have all along elaborated themselves a lot.
Finally I believe that I told you already (in others reviews) all the great, warm and lovely things that brought me here anew to read this.

Yours, Silvara

I cant' help it! It's the third time I read this, and still this passage makes me giggle insanely. Seph is bad. So very bad. A very, very bad person who happens to be a deadly flirt!

The part where Sephiroth stepped out of the shadows made me laugh, I thought of a soap when I read that. Very lovely, I always enjoy your AxS stories.

So cute! >.

BROVO!!

SEPHIROTH AND AERIS 4 EVER!

Aww that was a sweet story. I love Aeris x Sephiroth. I'll have to keep an eye out for your other stories!

You have absolutely no clue how long I've been waiting to see a Kingdom Hearts themed Sephiroth and Aerith pairing. I've seen only like one or two, and they were really bad or incomplete. So thank goodness for this story.

AH! THAT IS SO SWEET!
Aerith and Sephiroth are my favorite characters!
Please OH PLEEZE write some more like this!
(i feel sorry for Cloud though...)

YAY! i was as nervous as seph to know what aeris will say to cloud. *thou i know its a seph/aeris fic.* nice fic you have here ^^

UWE! That is the ONLY thing I can think of to express my rabid fangirliness at that. UWE!
That was so, friken, ADORABIBLE! ^_^ I put you in my faveorites and NEVER let you die!

Bravo! Bravo! I highly applaud this story, and have kept an avid vigil upon it since I discovered it. This is the second story that I have found on the site that deals with an Aeris/Aeris (whichever you should prefer) and Sephiroth relationship in the Kingdom Hearts universe that ties into the Final Fantasy universes instead of having them not exist, as they seem to in Kingdom Hearts. The first story has Sephiroth as, while no longer insane, manipulative in the beginning of his relationship with Aeris as of far, but this one has Sephiroth in a sane state mind, with a slight seeking-redemption attribute to his character--these are personally my favorite, as, judging on how Sephiroth was from the flashbacks (before he became a few fries short of a Happy Meal) in Final Fantasy VII, he seems to be a quite person that was somewhat antisocial, yet very caring of people, and I'm always interested to see how people portray Sephiroth dealing with the emotional and psychological baggage that Jenova left him with. The most noteworthy aspect that I can think of that must be complimented to you on, is the progression of interaction between our favorite anti-hero and cetra, how they both seems leery of each other at first, for good reason considering that they didn't part so amicibly when they last met, and how they gradually begin to become more comfortable in each others' presence as they discuss their pasts.

I shall continue reading this story in rapt interest, and if it is ending soon, I hope that there shall be a sequel to it.

My compliments to you again on your story.