A great story. Very good.

You captured his thoughts and emotions so well and even though he was the dark jedi you still caused me to feel a lot of pity and symptathy towards him.

This was excellent and brillantly wrote!

Sharp! I really enjoyed this!

I love the way you describe his feelings in just a moment, so to say.

This is a very, very touching piece. I love the way Anakin Skywalker was portaited, his charactor image was on the point of perfection. I almost cried out at the last line . . .this is so beautiful.