I read this once ages ago and (shame on me) never reviewed. I just stumbled across it again today and I've got to say, it's still one of my favorite DA stories. I love the outsider's perspective of how the 'verse had progressed and the little details of Logan's injury made this really hit home for me.

I also enjoyed your portrayal of Lauren. You managed to give a rather flat character some personality and heart. Everything just felt very full circle. Wonderful job.

I'm finally catching up on some reviews I've owed! I really liked reading this. It's an interesting perspective, looking through Lauren's eyes at the trial, Logan & Max the heroes, and Logan & Max the potential lovebirds.

I like Lauren reminiscing at the window (a good reminder that she'd spent some time there before), the details of her and Sophy's life since the pilot, her guilt, her amusement, and especially the image of the mist making Lauren feel as if she were hovering above the clouds. Good stuff.

A very nice story. It was a nice touch sticking in the wedding invite at the end. Good to see Lauren again and getting something of a story out of her driving the Audi TT :)

Really liked Max and Logan being brought up short by Lauren's observation about them.

I always wanted to read a story with Lauren Braganza return. I am glad you did it. I hope you have many more stories to post, so I can read.

Very nice...I've always enjoyed your fics. Looking forward to more from you.

Very interesting approach. I never thought that Lauren might feel guilty or that she would return.

And of course she had to see that Max's and Logan's has changed so much even if they don't see it.

Like it a lot ;-)

ooh great job, gotta love stories that tie up those little loose ends that make you wonder 'so what ever happened to her?'i'm looking forward to more stories so keep up the great work!

That was very nice - thank you!

That was great..both of them so insecure about the other's feelings as always.
I love the way Logan was proving his independence to Laura whilst being the perfect host. Really enjoyed this, thanks.

Very enjoyable. You've done a good job tying up some loose ends. I'd imagine that Lauren would feel guilty when she met Logan. A good idea to give us her perspective on Max and Logan's first meeting and on the shooting itself. Well done - now we need another story from you! :):)