*reads the summery*
...
*reads part 1*
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*dies*

Given that you also write Jak and Daxter fan fics, I must say:

I am so glad that I'm not the only one who came up with the SG1 Furrling-ottsle-precursors connection!

Reading Jack as a Blue Ottsle (giggle) reacting like Daxter did in J&D-PTL, about made me fall out of my chair I was laughing so hard :3

and I now have the image of fuzzy Jack riding on Teal'c'c shoulder, while the big guy blasts everything...

oh my! this is an interesting crossover.but i can't wait to read more!

later!

oh, Jack is so cute! And poor Daniel! Please tell me you haven't abandoned this, it's so good!

Sounds like poor Jack fell into a pool of light eco and turned into an ottsel, am I right? Hehehe... This is good so far! Keep updating, I'm waiting for Chapter 5!

Oh that was lovely. Poor old Jack so close and yet so far away thanks for writing.

Excellent so far! Please continue!

oh, is this going to turn in to crossover with Jak? You know what I mean. Or is this a result of playing to much Jak 1, 2 and 3, and watching To much SG1? Too much, HA! As if there could be such a thing.

Wow this is good. Also I think that it is Napolionic Power Monger. Well please update soon.

My vote goes in for great. I love this. I think that would be so cute (not that RDA isn't gorgeous as he is.). I keep thinking of Jack as a blue furby, with an attitude of course. Please tell me if that is wrong.
I love this, (huge grin and excited, screechy giggles)
Meghan

I like it. I don't think he would have O'Neill's DNA even if it was still O'Neill, though, because the change in body would change the genetic structure.

Ha
Wonder if jask will purr if sam rubs his ears
I think this is a great story and very funny to read. Keep going and don't worry about the re-views it reads fine to me.

Hehehehe... fun chapter.
Just one error: "Neopolic" should be "Napoleonic" (as it is derived from Napoleon)

Keep it up and thanks for sharing

Hehehe... fun start.
I really want to see this story continued.

Keep it up and thanks for sharing

Love it, characters especially jack are good, story is rolling along nicely, can't wait to see the reaction of the others when jack storms down the ramp no doubt acting as though nothing has changed. Thanks for taking the time and sharing.

*snicker*

this is fun so far... gotta wonder what the SGC will make of Jack's new appearance