 Charlie4claire 6/21/06 . chapter 1I get it and i dont? Are the people graves? Or is it that just a little saying at the end. Well whatever it is i thought it was cute. Keep writitng. |
 Olive Hue 3/29/06 . chapter 1Wow, that was disturbing and great, and really sad. I know I'd go crazy on that island if everyone else died. Oh man... that was sad. But really good. I dug it.
-Waki |
 GeorgiaRayne 3/11/06 . chapter 1*Anguished tears*
That was so beautiful! I love how it kind of implies that Claire is a little disturbed after being on the island for so long - like, she knows they're all dead, but she sort of can't help herself. |
 Ron Lover6789 2/18/06 . chapter 1Oh my god, that was so so so so sad. It was a real tear-jerker. Wow...I'm sad. |
 Ariana902 11/22/05 . chapter 1 Oh, that was beautiful, I loved it. |
 TristanFan465 8/31/05 . chapter 1Wow. Just... wow. No WAY was I expecting that! It adds a sense of creepiness and foreboding to the piece. I love how you made it so only she speaks or makes any interaction. Just the Sun/Jin bit confused me, is she imagining that?
But I just love this piece! Sweet, but creepy. Sent a shiver down my spine, I'll tell you that! |
 McKay 3/15/05 . chapter 1Nice twist. A nice change of pace. |
 Azure7 3/2/05 . chapter 1Holy cow, that was really good. |
 MaidM 2/21/05 . chapter 1Wow, that was a beautiful story with a very unecpexted twist at the end. It made a little shiver go down my spine. Thank you, we need more fics like this in the Lost section.
MaidM |
 bookworm835 2/21/05 . chapter 1WOW the end was really sad/shocking/cool! Very, VERY shocking. But really neat twist! I loved it! |
 alyssa 2/21/05 . chapter 1 A shiver ran right through me at that last line.
Very powerful piece, and definately one of my favorites. Wonderful job! |
 goblz 2/21/05 . chapter 1Whoa! I was not expecting that twist at the end. That was very sad, very powerful too. Great job! The only thing that confuses me is Jin breaking in with his broken English. Is that her imagining he would or hearing it in his head that he would do that if he were alive?
Besides that, you did a great job making sure that she's the only one who speaks or laughs. This was wonderful, although incredibly sad. |
 The Pirate Illusionist 2/21/05 . chapter 1It was cute but kind of freaky. It was good. |
 Xedra 2/20/05 . chapter 1 Whoa! Was NOT expecting that twist... absolutely LOVE it! Very Twilight Zone-ish. :) |