 Butterfree 2009-07-15 . chapter 1Aww, that was really such a sweet story ^^
That whole scenario of Nami and Luffy being stuck on an island together was perfectly played out. Usually, authors have huge problems working out that kind of plot without makng it seem too forced to random.
Though, there were maybe one or two holes in it that wasn't really explained(but could've if you did). Such as why Luffy didn't just use his rubber power to grab back onto the ship when they were flung off at first(if he still had the energy to grab onto Nami). Also, I'd picture the two more to be the type to go build a ship out of wood and try to find the others as their first instinct, espeically since Nami was the navigator.
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
 Lord of Murder 2009-05-13 . chapter 1Aw! So cute! I loved it! |
 snowman794 2008-09-15 . chapter 1aww cute ^^ |
 popyo 2008-08-22 . chapter 1 Such a cute, lovely story! Really like it, especially the ending, it was so nice and sweet. |
 Star AJT 84 2008-08-18 . chapter 1This story's really sweet! |
 Shinjite Florana 2008-04-15 . chapter 1Wow. What a sweet story! I really enjoyed it. |
 Kaydreams 2007-10-05 . chapter 1Aw! Cute! Loved it! |
 Raven the Ravenous 2007-07-23 . chapter 1Sweet. I can't imagine Nami being with any other guy other than Luffy. Even though it looks impossible, if you look at the hints closely, you can see that it IS possible. Hitori Ja Nai: Not Alone. Not a bad title. |
 LuffysAngel 2007-07-20 . chapter 1Nice fic! ^_^ |
 Thomas Lim 2007-07-01 . chapter 1 This has to be one of the best fanfictions i've read thus far. if only they put this into the anime it would be spectacular. |
 Smiffy and BunnyBoy Inc. 2007-06-13 . chapter 1One word: Kawaii. this is one of the best LuNa fics that exists acording to me^^ |
 Fairy Of Anime 2007-05-15 . chapter 1I love it!! It was so sweet!! They are so sweet together!! Pleases pleases write more soon!! |
 yuMeNami 2007-04-23 . chapter 1ill be lying if i say this is terrible..hehe.. |
 Tobias Bluesummers 2007-01-27 . chapter 1I was pointed to this fic by my wife, and I'm glad she did. I really enjoyed this story. You seemed to hit Luffy's care-free nature very well. Thank you for the excellent story. |
 tehsystem 2006-12-26 . chapter 1That was SO worth reading!
Thanks for making this \o/
Loved it loads :DD |