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Butterfree
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
Aww, that was really such a sweet story ^^
That whole scenario of Nami and Luffy being stuck on an island together was perfectly played out. Usually, authors have huge problems working out that kind of plot without makng it seem too forced to random.

Though, there were maybe one or two holes in it that wasn't really explained(but could've if you did). Such as why Luffy didn't just use his rubber power to grab back onto the ship when they were flung off at first(if he still had the energy to grab onto Nami). Also, I'd picture the two more to be the type to go build a ship out of wood and try to find the others as their first instinct, espeically since Nami was the navigator.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Lord of Murder
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Aw! So cute! I loved it!
snowman794
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
aww cute ^^
popyo
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
Such a cute, lovely story! Really like it, especially the ending, it was so nice and sweet.
Star AJT 84
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
This story's really sweet!
Shinjite Florana
2008-04-15 . chapter 1
Wow. What a sweet story! I really enjoyed it.
Kaydreams
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
Aw! Cute! Loved it!
Raven the Ravenous
2007-07-23 . chapter 1
Sweet. I can't imagine Nami being with any other guy other than Luffy. Even though it looks impossible, if you look at the hints closely, you can see that it IS possible. Hitori Ja Nai: Not Alone. Not a bad title.
LuffysAngel
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
Nice fic! ^_^
Thomas Lim
2007-07-01 . chapter 1
This has to be one of the best fanfictions i've read thus far. if only they put this into the anime it would be spectacular.
Smiffy and BunnyBoy Inc.
2007-06-13 . chapter 1
One word: Kawaii. this is one of the best LuNa fics that exists acording to me^^
Fairy Of Anime
2007-05-15 . chapter 1
I love it!! It was so sweet!! They are so sweet together!! Pleases pleases write more soon!!
yuMeNami
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
ill be lying if i say this is terrible..hehe..
Tobias Bluesummers
2007-01-27 . chapter 1
I was pointed to this fic by my wife, and I'm glad she did. I really enjoyed this story. You seemed to hit Luffy's care-free nature very well. Thank you for the excellent story.
tehsystem
2006-12-26 . chapter 1
That was SO worth reading!
Thanks for making this \o/
Loved it loads :DD
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