this is good.. it feels like it skipped summer. are there chapters from elsewhere that were not written to fill in the missing time or do you intend to fill it in with flash backs?? also i noticed a distinct difference in suss..attitude towards kagoma. ( he caved into his emotional instincts. hehhe).. any way didnt know if you would be explaining this new developement also.. anyway i like it .. hope to read more soon. or at least insight as to what you intended.. if you will not beable to finish.. blessings.

well.. just found this one.. i hope it starts where the other one left off.. ok.. going to start it now.. we.

it was o.k i gess i did not read it well enotht because i could not understand it but what i couht was good

Please don't give up on this story. I love it! But, You havent updated in a year. I was so happy when i found this because I love elsewhere. I'll be sad if it dosent continue.

Uh...what happened?
I was reading the first story at A Single Spark {all 17chaps there} then I read it up to chap21 here and now I have no clue what happened!?!?!?!?*cries*

PLEASE FINISH HAVING THE FIRST STORY POSTED SO THIS STORY MAKES A LICK OF SENSE!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!

Why did Kagome leave? is she pregnant?

EVIL EVIL EVIL!! Why have you waited so long to update...EVIL!

the sequal the sequal hey

Hi ...I absolutely love your stories!but am a bit confused, this is the sequel to Elsewhere right? that story stopped at chappie 21...so in this story chapter one- was a dream right? and Sess is "reviewing" his emotional conflicts?

Hi,
I've read elsewhere and just finished reading these two chapters. I think I missed a gap in between the stories. Have you told the reader why Kagome has left yet? Just curious. I think I know where you're going, but I still have a few hunches of where you could go...? What is a beta? Anyhow, I'm just getting aquaited with my 13 yr. old sister introduced me too it! I love your stories! I actually cried and laughed. That's how you know it's a good story! ^_^ Have you thought about bringing them (Sess/Kag) together? Procreating and all that? There could be bumps in the way, like say, Kagome's insistence of going to college and living life, not just being a housewife and mother? I think you mentioned her going into the medical field. That would be a great way to drive Sesshomaru nuts! Her working 24 hour shifts and not being able to play the meek mate. You're grammer is actually pretty good compared to what I've seen so far. I like how you don't enter in author comments every couple of paragraphs. Anyhow, let me know what you think.
Sincerely,
Ashley Lewis

How the mighty have fallen! Sesshomaru gets over his confusion about his feelings for Kagome in "Elsewhere" and turn her into an obsession in this sequel. But I think it's the only outcome available to a demon lord who has suppressed any attachments in his very long life much less a human at that. I am glad to see that Kagome is showing more back bone here and is defiant towards the ever arrogant taiyoukai.

This is excellent, I hope you update this sequel soon!

This is an intense fic. I don't really get what Kagome's trying to do, but I can't wait to find out.

its good i hope u keep it up but u haven't finish the first one have u...

it's good though a little confusing.

I absolutely adored your 'Elsewhere' story! You're blessed with such a descriptive vocabulary...I'm envious. LOL, anyways; only two chapters?! What's the hold up? This seems like it could turn out to be another magnificent work of art! Don't quit, what could be so wrong with your own ideas? If it doesn't sound acceptable; then change it. It's quite simple. ;) But anyways, your a very gifted authoress, and PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I'm dying to find out what happens! It's like a good soap that leaves a bloody cliffhanger after an extremely suspenseful part! Your killing me! *whines* Please, DO continue. This is pure genious.
~R.

Flowers,
Never cease to amaze me child. Keep up the fantastic writing, but don't let these yahoos pressure you into updating. Do it at your pace! Good luck.
I love the ideals you've taken thus far... nesting instincts and such. Nice touch.. very nice.

Dianara Darkraven