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| Sea Fire 2005-06-21 ch 10,  | abuseGreat!Waiting to see if tyr has any comments on the "mixed" child. |
| kaitins 2005-06-04 ch 10, | abuseohh my gosh! cliff hanger! now i just cant wait til the next chapter. great chapter. |
| Marebear007 2005-05-19 ch 9, | abusedylan's thoughts are completely correct. he is very wise to see that harper's family is very irrational. anyway, happy you updated. this was slow going and not one of your best but i'll be waiting for the next. so update soon! |
| kaitins 2005-04-16 ch 8, | abuseyay ppl from harper's past. i love when ppl do that in their stories. and i loved that you have cora there...she'll def be the one to melt harper's anger. keep it coming! |
| Marebear007 2005-04-16 ch 8, | abuseaw, sweet how you made harper the-no-good but ever-loving but with no-clue-as-what-to-do uncle. nice work! update soon, i can't wait to find out what happens! |
| kaitins 2005-04-05 ch 7, | abuseyay, off to Earth, that will be a fun setting. great chapter. looking forward to the next. |
| Marebear007 2005-04-05 ch 7, | abuseWOO-HOO! that's all i have to say! greatness! update soon. |
| kaitins 2005-03-30 ch 6, | abusehm, id love to get some history, learn a little about how it was that Anwen came to be an Amazon. great chapter, i really liked the end with Anwen thanking beka. keep the chapters coming. |
| Marebear007 2005-03-30 ch 6, | abuseyayness! you updated! i'm so happy! great job, btw! i can't wait for more. beka and rev are also written VERY nicely. |
| Marebear007 2005-03-22 ch 5, | abusenice work having her not trust rev. i know i wouldn't until i got to know him better (like in to loose the faithful lightning) anyway, awesome job. i hope the dead engineer wasn't gerald. that would be so sad! update soon. |
| kaitins 2005-03-21 ch 5, | abusei'd love to learn more about gerald, how he and anwen met, their whole story. great so far, look forward to more. |
| kaitins 2005-03-15 ch 4, | abuseGerald is...perhaps her husband? dang now im intrigued and you up and ended the chapter. hha just kidding, but seriously, good job on the chapter and please update soon. im waiting ofr harper to come around and be a good bro to his sis. |
| Marebear007 2005-03-09 ch 3, | abusenice job! this is getting so good. would be nice to hear more about her nietzschean mate. dead or alive? |
| Fwe 2005-03-09 ch 3, | abuseBeka! Be nice to the characters! I love your story! Please continue soon! |
| kaitins 2005-03-08 ch 3, | abuseanother great chapter. harper needs to suck up his anger and be there for his sister. |