Beautiful.

Totally superb! That piece of magic Severus threw out might just have saved Harry's life.

Superb!

Harry doesn't have to die but there is a good chance he will.

Totally terrific!

Ack! So sad! Poor Severus and Harry.

Most excellent!

Excellent beginning!

great story

I quite enjoyed this. A very well written story, and I enjoyed the briefness of it, the short-and-to-the-point way of it. You should probably mark it as complete though.

Annikaya,
Very realistic and true to canon. I personally dislike Whimpy Harry! with great zeal. The relationship with Professor Snape was excellent as well, Joyous, Kind Snape! doesn't really pull it off for me.To my mind he does not turn into a bundle of flowers and candy. Way to pull of a awe-inspiring, excellent fic! The ending is a little bit too brief but great nonetheless.
Thanks and Keep Writing! You have given me inspiration, the highest compliment I can pay to you.

DocJorgensen

P.S. Best of all, it was even better than J.K. Rowling!

Ah! I love it! That is all.

Cap and Bells--'and the quiet of love at her feet'. Ok, gender's wrong, but I think it would have done well in this chapter.

Excellent ending to an excellent story. Bows.

I wish both of them could have been so mature. When they were, it was too late (and you'll notice it took Dumbledore being out of the way for it to happen, at least in canon).

Sad, but I like this.

amazing. simply amazing. thanks for such a great read.