OMG I literally cried over this.
It has got to be the most powerful fanfic I have ever read. Words cannot express my emotion here--and this is coming from a person who hardly EVER gets emotional! Phenomenal work!
May the Force be with you.

as if the title wasn't beauitful by itself! that was gorgeous! so pretty! so beautiful. really, really sad. I liked the new angle you took. So fresh, so fluid, so beautiful! what a gift you have!

That was well written. I loved the last line the best. I loved the emotion in it as well. Thank you for a great read.

Wow, sad.
Well, I would hope she's delirious, or else this would make NO sense!
LOL. Anyways, great work, I LOVE SIRIWAN! :)

that was awesome, for lack of a better word

ooh...very good. SiriWan rules!

So... sad... and cute at the same time.

So beautiful and so sad.*sob* Excellent job...excellent..:^(

Nicely done.

that was so sad! but it was so god! i like ur writing!

The problem with this story is that SIRI DOES NOT DIE when Obi-Wan is a padawan.She appears in the jedi quest books.

I loved it! Though, I wonder if Siri would lose it like that, even close to death. Your story made me tense, which is a good thing, I luved how you put Bant in

Wow. An excellent piece of work. Loved Siri's roller-coaster emotions, and the way she kept mixing up the people who were trying to help her.

wah! this story made me cry! it was so good! :):):):)

-jkk

I cannot even express how wonderfully written this piece is!! The way Siri is delirious, just everything! ITS GREAT!! and i love Siriwan stories too lol