great story

I really enjoyed this story. It was a lot better than some of the crap people call stories. You did a really great job!!

I do not get what she ment in section 6 can you tell me
other wise the story is perfect

this is cool

WHE! good story! it inspired me to think about writing my own TT story after i get a little further in my WR(wolfs rain) story, i was even thinking a lot about it last night! thanksies, and keep writing! you are an amazing author! i loved this one, X's and O's, and im beginning to love your WR story, though its not very far along yet... ^_^ tootles!

You need to update.
This is excellent.

Interesting.. Captures your attention.

Wow..

I personally liked this story. The whole thing with Ria being artificially created and forced to kill was really hard-core, and the whole 'defying Slade and gaining her freedom' was really good. It just proves that if you want something, reach out and take it! Just make sure it's legal! (Laughs) Anyway, keep writing. I command it!

T.A.J.T.B.

i love how Ria's not like "oh, the Teen Titans are good and you are bad Slade. it takes her a while. is this a Rob/Rae fic or Rob/Star?

COOL. it reminds me of White Fang by Jack London, the part where shes a wolf, i mean. keep it up.

Creative ideas! Good writing form and imaginitative characters.