update soon please.

I finished the rest and I love it! You better update soon!

Good two chapters! can't wait to read the rest!

ah more!

Nice idea. I like where it is going so far. Good ideas, but I have one suggestion. Try to expand your chapters. Add more fluff, more detail. Give yourself more time to really describe everything. but not a bad start.

i lyked it

i think that u could go into more detail andit would greatly improve your story

I must have MORE! Great story, I wonder what will happen...

i thought this story was awesome! it's a great plot and the dialogue really sounds like the characters. i luv SM. thanx 4 writing this

good so far... Continue

I like the idea. Sad but really really good. Please continue!