"...Kairi wouldn’t have been surprised if the whole school knew by the way Naruto was always glancing at him..."

That threw me off for a minute,
otherwise, this is great so far. c:

The story has a good plot-line. However, it can be predictable. My biggest complaint is the incounter of Sora and Kariri. Dont make think 'why'd I pick up that book for that girl' And make kari all puzzled to! To be framk it is silly and childish and over-used on this wed site, and invokes the gad reflects. Try to not say what the character's thinking, let readers make unspoken assumations, because we all KNOW why Mr. James Dean boy stooped to chivary in a act of courteasy for Ms. Sandardea girl.

Peace

i love this story

Okay; so I'm only at the point of finishing chapter 10 on this here fanfic; but this is SO my favourite chapter now! Hahaha; "The male teachers at one point too"! That just made my day (i'm meant to be studying; i have 2 solid weeks of exams starting tomorrow...but oh well; this is too much to resist).
Great work! Now I'm off to continue the story. Sora&Kairidom; what more could you ask for?

attempted rape?
O.o Sora's so bad-@$$

haha your story's really good.
i can't keep my eyes off of the screen!
ehh
but i kinda have to cuz i gtg do my hw xD
favs
GREAT STORY!

haruT

currently i am on chapter 12 and i have been reading this book like all day..could u please point out the place in your story where you use your comparison of "carousel"..I like how you have used all the characters and there roles. Keep writing because your a great writer.

sometimes, when i read a fanfic story, i get this really strange feeling and its on my mind for days
and it defines how i feel and how i think
and makes me see everything differently
kind of inspirational, you know?
this is one of them.
good work.

I heart this story!
: D

love it.

This is absolutely the best fanfic I have ever read and I hope to see the sequel! I love what you did with the characters, especially Riku and Namine because I never pictured them together! Keep it up! You're amazing at this!

kool :)

The ending was hilarious!

i thought that this was a really really awesome story. the ending couldn't have been any better. great job! hurry and update your sequel, i mean it! >__

great story, little odd... but whatever.

i've been reading this story for some time now and i love it ^^
it reminds me of this song 'Never gonna give you up' except sora winds up doing the opposite of the 'never gonna' lyrics but learns from them. sry for the random song comment but i felt it just had to be said XD great story!