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RoseXshapedXtears
2009-05-22 . chapter 7
Wow, this story is amazing! Did Dumbledore ever know about the chimera being under the school? And if he did know, did he leave it there for a challenge to someone who found it? Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon! ;)
Megan Consoer
2008-07-11 . chapter 7
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
GirlWithNoName-Elli3
2006-08-26 . chapter 7
That was awesome! Is there going to be a sequel?
SpoonNinja
2006-08-25 . chapter 7
AW LAST CHAPTER! I thoroughly enjoyed that!"FOR GOD'S SAKE THATS A POMAGRANATE!" lol 2nd favorite quote, "You look like you got in a fight with a wearwolf anf lost." Aaw this was good, i like how Harry and Ron were totally forgotten. BO UGLY PEOPLE! HORAY BEER! Sorry...i like that commercial. ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LIKE YOUR STORIES!>_< ...
...HOORAY BEER!
Tinuel
2006-08-23 . chapter 7
Chapter 6: Hmm..actually, I'm not sure about this one. All those people are around her, so wouldn't it disrupt the channeling of the Chimera? Make sure that's not a plot error :)
None-the-less, Draco the rescue! I just love it. Pretty good description of the Draco/Chimera encounter.

And the last chapter.. :( So soon
I'd expect Hermione to simply push Harry aside and do what shes gotta do. She's rather stubborn, and Draco's life could've been at stake while she sat there and tried to explain. It might suit the situation for her to simply grab his hand and tell him the story as they head to kitchen. Waste less time, and still get to explain.
*blink* The kiss was rather unexpected. Of course, we've been waiting..and its half-approved by me :-p But kinda random. Like, having more emotions to build up to it? Plus, shes technically still dating Harry.
I dont feel like this ending left much closure, you know? Like, I'd LOVE to see Draco's reaction to the kiss. Harry's reaction to the breakup, and everyones reaction to a Draco/Hermione relationship.

Still, I enjoyed this story. I like this as a background for a future D/H relationship. Explaining where they've come from, why they even began their awkward little friendship, and so forth. You left yourself an opening..a not so closed ending..so you can always comes back and add another chapter to give the readers a bit of an idea of what followed, or a equal. Though, then you'd need a whole new plot ALL to do with them.
Anyway! This was fun ^_^
Tinuel
2006-08-22 . chapter 5
Chapter 1: Im enjoying this a great deal!
Wow..you made Krum a complete idiot xD I always thought he might be ;) Cant have skills, looks AND brains, now can you?
Draco's attempt at being civil about the breakup was done very well. It was small enough not to break far away from his character, yet meaningful enough to shine hope on his character :)
[her bottom ear and upper ear] ..I know exactly how your trying to describe it, but it still came out weird :-p It sounds like..she has two sets of ears ;) Know what I mean?
Just a suggestion. ^_^

Chapter 2: Hmm. The lake scene reminded me what a good friend Harry was, and I was very happy you did that. I hate people pushing Draco/Hermione relationships by destroying her friendships. And now hes giving her a necklace. Oh...a love interest perhaps? While i'd much rather see Draco, of course, its a good plot twist! AH-HA! So it IS an interest! O. Nothing spells out fun like competition ;)
[Hermione woke up and got up from her bed. She walked over to the balcony and looked out at the sky. The sun had not even risen yet.] Perhaps it'd be best just to describe it as a restless night that brought her to the balcony? :) Just a thought. Still loving your story!

Chapter 3: Heh. So like Malfoy to refuse to lend her the book. Kinda odd for her to pass out from being cold, as only 10 minutes had passed. But who knows! Maybe the halls/cold have something to do with another twist later on. *anxiously moving on!*

Chapter 5: Hmm. Interesting concept :) Creative.
Oh..Draco's bed! *highfive*
Ha! I knew they'd end up waking to one of those positions xD I didn't expect it the first night, but I did expect it. Whoot for awkward moments.

So! So far, things are rather interesting :-D
Now..I fear I must stop for the evening. Its 1 am. Except the final reviews from me tomarrow when I finish reading :)
Lena-Malfoy.-.Draconisa
2006-06-30 . chapter 6
Hey! It's been so much time since your last update!

I like this fic, and I liked this chap! I want more hermione-draco!

I beg you to continue wrinting! Please!

x

Lena
SpoonNinja
2006-06-26 . chapter 6
FINALLY! You updated...this was intense! lol its been so long but its good, now if only Harry would get over Hermione meh lol. Never been a fan of those two being a couple...(inserts personal feelings of jealousy) HIS

i still like you though lol >_
marajade64
2005-12-16 . chapter 5
well..just read all 5 chapters..interesting..got me wanting more..update soon:)
niomi-4-love
2005-07-29 . chapter 5
i just stated reading your story tosay and i really like this chapter the best and think you really need to get the next chapter up! it's getting great!

lots of love NIOMI
mischivious mistress
2005-06-25 . chapter 5
that was really good. i cant wait till the next chapter.
Kichou
2005-06-20 . chapter 4
Nice story. Please update soon.
gummybears616
2005-06-19 . chapter 4
OOh, i like this story. You had better update quicker than you have been, cause im not a very patient person.
Hugglz,
Sara
SpoonNinja
2005-06-11 . chapter 3
Are you ever gonna update 'Lyssa? U keep telling me you will! >_< ur breaking my little black ninja heart...;_; email me k?

SpoonNinja
2005-04-04 . chapter 2
NO! Not that Couple Alyssa! ;_; *Smuggles Harry out of story where Spoon Ninja and Harry can live hapilly ever after in a magical land called New Jersey...(no idea why i said Jersey) *cries* No HARRY NO! Blah, it was still an awesome chapter lol

UPDATE PLEASE!!
"Elephants on steroids" LOL XD
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