 buddybuddy96 2009-09-15 . chapter 3Will this be updated? please? |
 lady-warrioress 2006-04-25 . chapter 3you gotta update. I wanna see who Raven falls for. Let it be Hiei! Please let it be Hiei! |
 animegirl9000 2005-09-05 . chapter 3cool story although the second chapter thing confused me a little but still rocks |
 shadow 2005-08-05 . chapter 2 i think it would be best if it was raven and hiei, i think they make a better pair |
 bunni 2005-07-04 . chapter 3 raven / kurama as a couple |
 Tsuna Dragon 2005-06-29 . chapter 3SHWEET! Keep up the great work ^_~ |
 BlueroseSS 2005-06-23 . chapter 3Well now its summer, you don't have to worry about HW, so you'll update faster right!?*looks hopefully at you* Anyways, this is a realy good story! I like Hiei so far. Can't wait for the chapter!
Mina |
 KC Whitestar 2005-06-20 . chapter 3I think this is great!! U're awesome at Hiei i love it^_^ Keep up the great work! |
 Dr. Evans 2005-05-09 . chapter 3Not exactly, your pretty good at it. |
 no name 2005-05-09 . chapter 1 hi please wright more for this store cause i like it and i'd like to now who gets with rae so please update please and thank you. sunserly no name ps i really like your store. |
 Coolgamer282000 2005-05-03 . chapter 3It seems you're doing fine with Hiei so far. Don't worry, the more you write, the more you'll get his attitude. But so far, he's in character.
These seven assassins sound interesting. I can't wait to see what's next!
Good job, and you're doing good with Hiei, at least to me you are! |
 Coolgamer282000 2005-05-03 . chapter 2I like the way both guys make their way known to Raven.
This is going to be really good to see were this goes!!
On to the next chapter for me then!! Nice job!! |
 firegirl 2005-05-02 . chapter 3 Hi I think it should be a hieiraven story and a kurama and starfire. I've read a few stprys on them as cuple. I think it would be wonderful. don't let the others tell you what the parings should be. its your story you come up with the parings. |
 Tigerlilly1234 2005-05-02 . chapter 3Spagetti for you! I think are doing fine with Hiei I like the assasins! funess for the TTs it will get interesting. I hope there's more hiei Raven soon yeah! them! |
 Dea Lunae 2005-05-02 . chapter 3xD Have Hiei call them a wench or something.. I have no idea why, but while I wa reading I imagined Hiei calling Raven that and having Raven toss him out the window o_o
'Adult people went to and from to work.'
Ehm.. I don't know if I'm supposed to correct you or now, but I think it's 'to and fro' not 'from' Eh.. I'm supposed to be doing my homework when I'm reading fanfics and trying to rewrite my own o_o (I stupidly lost my notebook >.>) |