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| Mr. Skies 2006-01-31 ch 8,  | abuseO.O Wow, now that's amazing. Great writing skills and incredible concept, how things went in the eyes of the others. Keep going, for the Sun's sake! |
| Firefury Amahira 2005-08-24 ch 7, | abuseNice way of putting the events in Boktai 2! It's a bit short and sometimes confusing as to who or what it's following, but I rather suspect you intended that. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Firefury Amahira 2005-05-17 ch 5, | abuseYAY! New chappy! Can't think of anything constructive to say at 2 am in the middle of finals week though. So I'll just say that I look forward to the next chapter! Otenko saying "Oh **." seems just a hair out of character, but given the circumstances, I can see the physical manifestation of the Sun using some coarse language =p |
| shiney mew 2005-05-13 ch 5, | abuseXD Otenko dropped an F-bomb! Short chapter, but... XD |
| Heliotropium 2005-05-12 ch 5, | abuseOtenko doesn't curse ;o; |
| Firefury Amahira 2005-04-26 ch 4, | abuseI am intrigued! It looks like you've got an interesting concept going here, and have the writing skills to execute it well. I look forward to seeing where you go with this ^_^ |
| Heliotropium 2005-03-11 ch 3, | abuseIt hasn't been proven that Sabata and Django are twins but a lot of people say that they are. The Konami site said that Sabata is the older brother, but you still have the older and younger twin. Even if the birth difference is one second, the younger twin still has to acknowledge the older as "older brother". Of course, in the wonky world of the manga version, Sabata is definately the older brother by many years. Oh well, nice story so far. The formating of diolouge reminds me of Lord of the Rings. |
| Heliotropium 2005-02-25 ch 2, | abusemep. Some people say that Sabata and Django are twins. But eh. Lauran is a fancharacter or another name for Lady? :O |
| Heliotropium 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, another BOktai fic XP This is going very nice so far. Me likes the descriptions and all :O |