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Reviews For: He Noticed

KarenleFay
2005-08-25
ch 3,
abuseAw... I'm glad it worked out in the end - it was getting a little too angsty for me.
KarenleFay
2005-08-25
ch 2,
abuseHow unfair! And how sad...
KarenleFay
2005-08-25
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, loving fic. Great job, I can't wait to read more!
Burkoski
2005-03-13
ch 3,
abuseWow. I loved this story. You definitely need to write more. And soon.
Lament
2005-03-03
ch 3,
abuseNice job! I'll try not to babble this time. ;)

I like your shower scenes/memories. I never liked math, but Nick + Greg + showers is an equation I can get behind!

Are you playing with us, or are the boys really being put back on the same shift?
Sillie
2005-02-25
ch 3,
abuseHeehee.. :'3 Loved this.
ladyjr16
2005-02-23
ch 3,
abuseyea you are getting rid of Sophia thank goodness cause i do not like her. thanks for writing ^^
ladyjr16
2005-02-22
ch 2,
abusethis is really good but one question are you going to go on and maybe fix this mess that Ecklie made? please please (_)
x-intoxicating-x
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseThat's it. Ecklie's gotta pay.
Dr FooFoo
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseOh my god, I actually started crying at the end... What the hell. o.o Maybe it's because I'm listening to like, extremely angsty music. Oh well.

I realy love this. I read it over yonder at The Desert Archive and loved it there, too. But I really, really love it. I love how you started off in a somewhat happy way, but it still had that kind of underlying tragic feel to it. And that's exactly what it is -- a tragedy.

I really hate Ecklie. ;_;
Cathleen18
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseCan I cry for Greg?
Sillie
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseAww... *huggles Nick and Greg*
Lament
2005-02-21
ch 1,
abuseWarning--I'm sleep-deprived. Sleep-deprived=babbling and giddy. Woo-hoo! :D Anyway, I enjoyed your story, and I think you should continue with it.

The dark mood of the piece really works (especially since it echoes the moods of disgruntled N/G slashers everywhere who miss the witty banter of their boys).

Since Nick and Greg ARE together in my fantasy world, I suspect the shift fiasco would have have a major toll on their relationship. It will be interesting to see where you take the story.

See? I'm babbling. ;)
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