This is possibly the most evil, calculating, and heartless portrayal of Nabiki I've ever seen, and I loved it. I like the Ranma-Nabiki pairing, but too often authors go out of their way to make Nabiki softer in an attempt to make it easier to sympahtize with her character. Done right, it's great. Done badly, it negates the character of Nabiki and turns her into something other than the cool, ruthless, mercenary Ice Queen we've come to know and love and fear.

Bravo.

That was a neat little plot twist. Good job. =)

I quite liked this story. I think its an excellent example of what Ranma would do if he was compelled to go to China against his will. I also like how you have Nabiki set up the rest of her family heh. Very nice work here.

Wow, this was cool! :D

That was kinda really sick, what the Amazons did. The two that went too far are dead, though...

Ranma never even defeated her in a really formal challenge, either! The second time was a total mistake!

It's been a while since I read the story, and I must say I like the second chapter. It makes it very clear what happened at the end of the first chapter, which is a little confusing. The second chapter seems to have been expanded (either that, or it's been longer than I thought), but I must say that the extra bits do a lot for the story. You did a very good job here.

I love the pairing... I've always been fairly partial to complimentary, or is it supplementary, pairings and the Nabiki/Ranma brain/brawn thing you have going is really nice to see. Good job.

We need more ranma/nabiki fics like this.

Very enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing.

Best,
~JohnnyG

Personally, you could have made it into a far more expanded story, thus turning this into a really really good story, instead of just really good. Keep writing.

Don't buy the Ranma/Nabs pairing, but otherwise, love it ^_^

Most twisted, sick, wonderful Nabiki/Ranma ever. Ever.

Whew, lots o violence. Not that I blame Ranma though, nice story.

I like this. The second chapter also makes clear what happened in the first chapter. I personally found the first chapter very confusing, but once I read the second chapter, it made perfect sense. I personally believe that Nabiki's Ice Queen persona is just a wall she built after her mother died. You may not, but the story fits in with it (sort of), so I like it.

Very funny.