wow, i really enjoed that!
I like reading about the days before harry etc
great writing :)

That was really beautiful, especially the way you showed so much in so few 'spoken' words.
I really enjoyed this! Keep writing!

XD

I liked how you captured their feelings so well...very well done indeed.

Great story...beautiful plot.
-gremlin-

Excellent job! I love how you portrayed the very real torment between the two separated cousins. I always thought there would be so much more between the two of them if circumstances were just a bit different.

Esc.

this is one match i never thought of making, though i mostly work with stuff evolving around main characters dying so i don't have much experience with the romance side of it. you write well though...i'm impressed

*claps* Sirius/Bella! Huzzah! So sad, though...they just need hugs! I like how they dueled in the begining...deflects their characters a lot.

*waves around Sirius/Bella flag*