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4everobsessed
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuseWow...that was so sad. I thought it was Angel the whole time till the end. hah.very sweet. GREAT JOB!
graga serrs
2005-06-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseFantastic, poignant, and beautiful. I thought it was Angel at first. Great job.
Buffy-CrazyaboutAngel
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I almost cried...it's so sad and hurting...but Spike did the right thing.
lonely*tune
2005-03-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww.. you almost fooled me there :P
i was reading the beginning part of the story, and i thought it sounded like Spike, not Angel. So the name was - surprising. I guess. And then the end made everythign clear. that was a sad piece, and so moving. I'd love to see more =D
GoldenAngl99
2005-02-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, poor Spike. That was so sad, but very well written.
GoldenAngl99
2005-02-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, poor Spike. That was so sad, but very well written.
Demonica Mills
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseAH! How sad! Nice twist at the end, but still super sad. Good job!
DaMick
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseI loved this story. Very dark romantic and emotional. The only thing; I think it would have been more poignant without the last line, letting it end with 'her voice saying she loved someone else.' I think it's pretty clear that Spike is the subject of the last paragraph and it gives the reader a second to think again about your piece before it fully sinks in. I still loved it and can't wait for more.
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