Wow...that was so sad. I thought it was Angel the whole time till the end. hah.very sweet. GREAT JOB!

Fantastic, poignant, and beautiful. I thought it was Angel at first. Great job.

OMG! I almost cried...it's so sad and hurting...but Spike did the right thing.

aww.. you almost fooled me there :P
i was reading the beginning part of the story, and i thought it sounded like Spike, not Angel. So the name was - surprising. I guess. And then the end made everythign clear. that was a sad piece, and so moving. I'd love to see more =D

Aw, poor Spike. That was so sad, but very well written.

Aw, poor Spike. That was so sad, but very well written.

AH! How sad! Nice twist at the end, but still super sad. Good job!

I loved this story. Very dark romantic and emotional. The only thing; I think it would have been more poignant without the last line, letting it end with 'her voice saying she loved someone else.' I think it's pretty clear that Spike is the subject of the last paragraph and it gives the reader a second to think again about your piece before it fully sinks in. I still loved it and can't wait for more.