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| 4everobsessed 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was so sad. I thought it was Angel the whole time till the end. hah.very sweet. GREAT JOB! |
| graga serrs 2005-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic, poignant, and beautiful. I thought it was Angel at first. Great job. |
| Buffy-CrazyaboutAngel 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I almost cried...it's so sad and hurting...but Spike did the right thing. |
| lonely*tune 2005-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww.. you almost fooled me there :P i was reading the beginning part of the story, and i thought it sounded like Spike, not Angel. So the name was - surprising. I guess. And then the end made everythign clear. that was a sad piece, and so moving. I'd love to see more =D |
| GoldenAngl99 2005-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, poor Spike. That was so sad, but very well written. |
| GoldenAngl99 2005-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, poor Spike. That was so sad, but very well written. |
| Demonica Mills 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAH! How sad! Nice twist at the end, but still super sad. Good job! |
| DaMick 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story. Very dark romantic and emotional. The only thing; I think it would have been more poignant without the last line, letting it end with 'her voice saying she loved someone else.' I think it's pretty clear that Spike is the subject of the last paragraph and it gives the reader a second to think again about your piece before it fully sinks in. I still loved it and can't wait for more. |