I LOVED IT! even the very sticky cheesy ending

that is so romantic!
plez update!

This really was touching. I liked how you didn't make Potter a REALLY big jerk and his transition (though a little fast) was well thought out. I'm going to go read more of your stories right now.

so cute. So sweet. You're an amazing author. And i personally love cliches they're just so wonderful and clichey. Please write more and update your other fics. It would make me very happy.
-sillystringdancingqueen

i liked it.

Cute story. Well-written and developed, except it was a bit rushed at the end there. I would have liked to see more!

aw so romantic ^_^

*comicrileef*

great story! very cute! keep up the great work!

Aw,

That's cute!

Sorry Lils, he's mine now,

Or should i just settle with serious?

I know, i'll have both!

ew that's just sick, stay out of this kat number 2

OMG! I love this story. The ending is so perfect, it reminds me of those commercials, which is probably where you got that idea from. I was a little confused when I started the 8th chapter and saw that it would be the last one, but you really managed to pull it in and tie the ends together really well. I was listening to the song Vulnerable by Secondhand Serenade and I think that it really fit the story!

Cute ending. I love clichés. =]

Aww. Lily's story was so sad. I love this story though. =]

its really good. short, sweet, and perfect.

great story!

I thought it was very cute. I love how sweet it was. And the last line makes me smile. I also like your story pride: a tale of two pruebloods...you should update that one.