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Koko
2009-09-29 . chapter 33
AH! BEST STORY EVER! It had me snorting with laughter, crying "Aw"ing and cheering. I would give it a 12 out of ten ;)
animefan135
2009-08-03 . chapter 33
beautiful ending and wonderful fic! =)
animefan135
2009-08-03 . chapter 32
I am now going on to the last chapter with clear hope in my heart that you will NOT make this fic into a tragedy! I have tears after the last chapter, lol...well on to the last chapter I guess
Red Shagging Couch
2009-08-02 . chapter 33
One of the most original and eccentric X-men story I have ever read. And I’m not going to lie, it tired me out because it’s so long and I had to read it in between busy schedules, but seriously, being sleep-deprived was TOTALLY worth it for this fic. :-)
animefan135
2009-08-01 . chapter 12
Bumbershoot!
:D
2009-07-26 . chapter 33
wow. just... wow. you melted my brain. it's in a little puddle under my chair.
aiRo25
2009-03-24 . chapter 33
Wow! I love this. Hard to read in spots (you can't help but cringe at Remy putting his foot in it) but wonderful!
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-04 . chapter 33
HOLY MOTHER-LOVIN' A! Ok, so I didn't review for a while there because I just simply couldn't waste the precious few minutes it would take when there were more chapters waiting for me... but now it's done! WOW!! Freakin' awesome story! Dang, it's been a while since I've read a really good, epic story, and that, my friend, was one for sure!! Holy crap... you had me there, for a second, I thought "This little is going to end this thing with a HORRIBLY SAD ending!?!?!", but then, you pulled the rug out from under me and it ends all happy! YAY! Once again, all I can say is "wow".
Some notes I didn't mention in my lack of reviews from previous chapters:
* LOVED the Remy/Henri interaction! Like, beyond words how much I loved that. Loved loved loved. I'll just say it one more time. LOVED. IT. A LOT.
* Loved the Tante/Remy stuff too. Not quite as enthusiastically, but it was still very very good and incredibly grin-inducing.
*Kitty: "Did I stutter?" Literally laughed out loud on that one. I really loved what you did with Kitty and Remy in this fic. I see them having an interesting dynamic, in a completely non-romantic sense, of course. They just seem like an interesting duo, and I loved how much they got to interact in this story. Skippy yay!

Ok, I think those were my only major points. Phew... I should go write more on my own fic, but quite frankly, no one is expecting an update, since the story is technically completed at this point, so I can take my sweet time and go read another one of your stories! YAY!
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-02 . chapter 16
HOLY CRAP!! Ok, no time for a review, I HAVE to read te next chapter... NOW!
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-02 . chapter 15
Skippy yay! Ok, totally happy chapter, although I'm coming to an awful realiztation: The way you depict their relationship in this story is on the same lines as I'm doing in my continuation of Normal that I'm writing right now. I promise, when you read it later, I'm not stealing, I swear! It's just sort of... well, the same dynamic as you've got going on here. But I was already writing it before I started reading all this, I swear! Maybe that's part of the reason I'm loving this so much.
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-02 . chapter 13
Is it weird reading reviews for a story you finished writing two and a half years ago? Seems like I'd be weird...
So, yeah, not liking Carol now. Not that I did in the first place, but, um, wow. That girl can carry a grudge! If I was Remy, I would SO abandon any thoughts of dumping the girl at this point. I would fear some sort of Bobbitt-esque retaliation from her... So now he has to marry Belle AND Carol, since either could and would kill him in his sleep. Great use of your Reprieve, dumbass. *Happy sigh once again* I'm so loving this story. I love Remy with all my heart, but I still love seeing the guy up and creek without a paddle. Gee, maybe I should feel a little pity for the guy, he is in a tight spot now... hm, yep, I do feel a little pity. Just a LITTLE, no more. And hey, look at that, I have a happy little bundle of chapters still waiting for me! Woot woot!
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-02 . chapter 12
MAN WHORE! Ok, so I'm seriously pissed that the dog said all those awful things about Rogue! I'm not pissed that you wrote it, it clearly was an awesome choice if it can illicite such strong emotions from me, but I want to kick the jerk where it counts! Stick with the half-truths and tricky wording buttmunch! Those words are going to come around to haunt him I suspect. Ah... don't you love a good story where you can both love and hate the main character? I do. So, you know, kudos for you. Not-perfect Remy is WAY more interesting to read about then strangely angelic Remy. Ok, on to the next chapter (I LOVE that I have like 20 more chapters to read! That means it'll be a long time until I'm left wanting more...)
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-02 . chapter 11
Ok, that was like the best, most well-written, completely addictively entertaining, heart-warming chapter ever written! *insert happy sigh here*
I'm completely loving this story. And yes, I've officially said goodbye to my notion of waiting to review until the end. I think that's obvious at this point. I love how not once did Remy think about how to seduce Rogue... squee! So different from with Carol, which is clearly just a game (an annoying one at that).
I'm finding that it's taking me a long time to read this fic, which is a good sign. When something is crap, it only takes a nano-second for me to roll my eyes over the words. But here, I'm finding I want to let everything fully soak into my brain, let my mind actually 'hear' the conversations (because your verbal timing is excellent).
Ok, last note, don't you love writing the punchline to stories/jokes that you don't have to write? It's so much fun! Of course, you have to follow the unofficial 'punchline'fomat: So then says, "!". So then I said "But that's not my bunny!". So then my dad says "But it WAS green Jello!". So then Obama says "But they were penguins!". Ah, good times...
Lizzieturbo
2009-03-01 . chapter 8
Mother freakin' A! Ok, so I totally didn't see that coming. I'm bad at predicting twists. Anyway... wow. So, I guess this chapter really summed up how dumb Carol truly is. She can TOUCH Remy, the whole freakin' time, and she DOESN'T, until the end?!?!?! What is wrong with this girl?! Is she learning impaired?! If you have the Remy, you TOUCH the Remy. It's basic logic. Man, is this girl dumb.
Lizzieturbo
2009-02-26 . chapter 5
Ok, so I'm reviewing early, again. Too darn tempting, you know? Anyway...

What a freakin' tramp! Remy, that is. And since you can't read emotion from text, I'll tell you that I'm smiling while typing this, so 'tramp', in this situation, is a good thing. Like the dog. I love an 'imperfect' Remy, one that's more, oh I don't know, realistic. Apparently a lot of writers think that men who sleep around and are heavily influenced by their sexual desires will some day find 'the one' and INSTANTLY completely change their personality and habits and instincts and become, well, basically a woman. Lame! This version is way more fun and interesting to read, plus it just sets the plot up perfectly... I can't wait to see what happens next! And excellent writing on Carol, she was 'just' annoying enough, 'just' boring enough. You've perfectly created someone to compare Rogue to without getting sloppy and having her be so OVERboard with her obnoxiousness that no one would really believe that ANYONE, much less the ragin' cajun, would give for five seconds of their time.
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