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| kingleby 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abusethis story is great ^_^ the crossover with firefly is a genius idea! ^_^ |
| Mandanza 2007-08-29 ch 3, | abuseWow, this is really great! I haven't seen the series, Firefly, but it's still damn good :) It's a shame you don't write it any longer. I think you should update, you know. And I bet a lot of other people also want you to. Can't you consider it? Please? For the sake of your loving fans ;) Anyway, this is going straight to my fav list. |
| Mimo-Sene 2007-06-30 ch 3, | abuse*Falls over* I'm guessing chapter four isn't coming soon, eh? This is extremely good, you should REALLY consider continuing. |
| chop4tess 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseI like it!! Pls update soon! I havn't seen firefly but i've seen serenity which is based on the TV show firefly. I'm goona add this story to my story alert list, and i'm hoping i get an alert soon!! |
| Sera and Tails 2006-10-06 ch 3, | abuseShame you trashed the story..its really neat, and very unique. We're huge Firefly fans as well as Chrno Crusade fans and never thought we'd see the two put together. It'd be nice if you continued it... *hopeful smile* Cheers, Sera |
| raspberrysorbet 2006-03-30 ch 3, | abuseUh-oh...whats gonna happen?Hehehe!I understand now-that was like a flashback right?I get it,I get it...alrighty-update soon! |
| raspberrysorbet 2006-03-30 ch 2, | abuseWait,wait,wait-I am so darn confused-who's Rosette?And then,who's the bounty hunter girl? |
| raspberrysorbet 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abusePlease update this real soon-I absolutely love the plot. |
| tegan new 2006-03-23 ch 3, anon. | abusegood story so far. can't wait for the next chapter and good on ya. bye. ^-^ |
| M 2005-10-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow, this is so awesome! I never saw Firefly.. but I think I should watch it if it's as good as this is turning out to be! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work. |
| kaitou angel 2005-06-15 ch 3, | abuseUPDATE I LIKE THIS STORY! |
| elyssalyn 2005-04-23 ch 3, | abuseI really like what you've written so far. You've certainly peaked my curiosity with the cliff hangers you've left. Please update soon and put me out of my misery! |
| dana 2005-04-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseI've really enjoyed what you've written so far. I hope you haven't abandoned this or have gotten writers block or something and update soon. I can't wait to see what's next! |
| Not Known 2005-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this is a really good story, but I am a bit confused...on the first chapter there is supposed to be 3 men right? Then why do I sometimes count it to 4? E.x = Falling back in a cry of pain, gripping his damaged limb, the other three men pulled out their pistols, eyes frantically searching for the source of the shots. Does that mean that the injured man also pulled out his gun or is there 4 men there originally? There are also places were you have mixed up if it is he or she. Not a big mistake and hard to find, but it can be both annoying and confusing. Otherwise GREAT STORY, Please continue soon. |
| WD 2005-03-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow! Love this story! I know what it's like to have a lot of homework...but you "GOT" to update soon!Tell your teacher you got a lot of people hanging on your neck begging you to continue writing if that helps, but PLEASE update soon! |