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Quill-32
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is fun, and just silly enough, and very creative--I don't think I've seen another story that had Grissom's dinner with Sofia be Sara's idea! Now THAT'S clever.
nithe
2005-09-30
ch 1,
abuseFor such a random challenge, you did great. It didn't feel forced, with the possible exception of the first line. That's hard enough, but with those items, I'm positively astounded. Good work.
Craz Lollipop-Imp
2005-04-11
ch 1,
abusea stupid much
Denese925
2005-02-27
ch 1,
abuseYou have the best explanation for the "Sofia dinner invitation"!
TPTB could use your help!
Please continue - this is great.
wert
2005-02-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was great. I love how you write Grissom!! How can you say you have lack of creativity?! This story was wonderfully original! Well done.
MissAmanda
2005-02-24
ch 1,
abuseOh my goodness. I laughed and loved it! Keep it up!
Pheo
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI adored this! My favorite parts were how you resolved the dinner with Spork, Greg's "imagination," and the GSR moment that we direly needed! Thanks for sharing!
untapdtreasure81
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abusei liked it strange but good! keep it up!
hazelmom
2005-02-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseHi! I think you did a great job. A lack of creativity is not something you will every have to worry about. It is an interesting take on what happened at the dinner. Certainly one that soothes our collective anxiety about it. Thanks for writing it.

sheila
Chicklit
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseLack of creativity? I think not. Thoroughly enjoyed this tasty morsel - Thanks!
Augusta
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet. Is there more to the story?
rokothepas
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat story and very creative too. I loved it. Keep it up;-)
Woodstock99
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! I would give Grissom the last oreo enytime! Ans any story that has Sofia suffering in some way is good for me :)
krysalys73
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuse*snicker*
This was really friggin cool. A wonderful read.
Some good chi going around that place for once.
-}-@
Krys
whirligig
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abusewhat lack of creativity? this was great! yay! I think I'll start nagging you to continue this. Feed my fluff addiction, please : )
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