Kinda reminds me of little Simba and Zazu.

lol XD that was em-azing! i love it!

That was very cute =) Nice job.

nice. strange, freaky, and wierd, but funny. well, ok,not that wierd. but is strange, though.

Lol,very accurate.

I remember roleplaying a Minish Cap/Windwaker crossover once.KORL snapped in Vaati's face, ha. Well, actually it was a clone made by an evil Rito sorceress. And yes, there were two Links. Kinda like Four Swords, except it's two and not four.

heh, that was cute!

HE! that was funny! so funny that I got an idea:

Raine:*watches Link and KORL argue* -.-;

Hey King?

KORL:what?

Raine...*whispers*can I do the honors?

KORL:*nods*

Raine:*gets up,walks by Link having a ranting fit
and shoves him off the boat*

Link:>_< RAINE!

Raine:*looks innocent*^-^

Heheheheheh... dude that was funny as hell, whenever I have something screwy in my head I'd write something like that, but I could see Link and the King of Red Lions arguing like that for no apparent reason. I enjoyed the story keep it up.

~Vortus

Interesting, but ridiculously short. And a bit confusing in places.

- For one thing, how did Link finally know what direction West was? Nothing seemed to trigger his sudden revelation. Was he just keeping quiet for the sake of being obnoxious, or did something actually clue him in to what direction they were going? It would have been nice if you had elaborated on that some more.

- He would have kept candies in his Spoils Bag, not his Delivery Bag... though I highly doubt he would have had candy packed with him to begin with.

- "Then, a shocked, 'What are you doing?'" Why was the King shocked that he was eating a piece of candy? Obviously he would have brought it with him to eat, so...

Anyway, it was a cute little idea, and the "Grumpy old coot" bit at the end was slightly amusing, but honestly, this doesn't deserve its own Fanfiction. Perhaps if you had made it longer, elaborated more, given them more of a scenario to be arguing about, it would have been better. I think it would have been a nice addition to a story or one-shot, to add a bit of humor to a pre-existing story, but as it is it is simply far too short and random to make a decent fic.

- Kichi

I love it! So funny, this fic has quite a bit of charm. Nice work!

lol! That was pretty good! I enjoyed that! ^__^

That's funny! I really enjoyed that short little clipet! Great job!

lol, this was great! I nearly died laughing! This was very funny! great job!!;)