Reviews for Individualistic Monsters

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Triste1 2008-05-09 ch 5,	abuseM, it was terribly lovely and I enjoyed it a lot. It's rare for me to find Gaara/Sakura fics that are short and sweet, and with good diction! I love some of the ones out there to death, but the length either kills me, proverbially, after a long day at work and school or the gramatical errors simply leave my mind screaming. Sometimes, it sucks to have had good English teachers who scared grammatical correctness into our wee, innocent minds while they could. The characters were done splendidly. Sakura still had spunk but you gave her enough depth to still be who she is while Gaara was wonderuflly portrayed, emotion-wise. I really enjoyed that part. Oh, and the character interaction was lovely. It was the first fic where Uchiha Sasuke (with Orochimaru possessing him) actually died in a confrontation with Gaara and Sakura that I can remember. And I really liked that! Not that I'm anti-Sasuke, it's just so rare for me to read a plot where Orochimaru actually took over the kid. Naruto and Kakashi were also very delightful side characters in this fic. Ah, a fatherly Kakashi--now that's something nice to picture. There were a few minor grammatical errors about the place, but nothing that left my mind screaming, thank goodness. Just look out for them in future; minor little things like additional commas in certain places and in the first chapter some missing spaces between words. Keep writing and best of luck with future fics!
dragon_fly 2008-01-31 ch 5, anon.	abuseLOVED IT! Although, I think the ending came a little suddenly, but its your story, so you can write it how you like!
MC25 2008-01-18 ch 5,	abuseThere were lemons yes, but the story was still above decent, it was well written, and even the sex scene was tastefully done. I really enjoyed this! :D
Sakuraangel1327 2007-12-30 ch 4,	abuseSo did he end up raping her or not? Or did Sasuke/Orochimaru get stopped in time by Gaara... MY SAVIOUR. lmao, ;) please tell me.
-SMILING.ROSE 2007-12-23 ch 5,	abuseThat was such a cute story! :) Awh.
Sakura LOVE shadow 2007-10-31 ch 5,	abuseWoHO Love the story!
tashicutz 2007-09-28 ch 5,	abusethis was an amazing story, i loved it and it basically blew me away, i love how you made gaara and sakura so like them but so unlike them, they were so real i love it! tasha
tashicutz 2007-09-27 ch 3,	abusethis is such an amazing story, i only just recently got into naruto and decided to check out some fanfics and this is just amazing! your a great writer, and i love how you portray each character, its briliant! tasha
katiesquilts 2007-08-08 ch 5,	abuseFinally, someone who can describe a freakin' makeout scene with just enough detail. Usually it's so bad you just gasp and close the window, but this was actually pretty appropriate. claps Good for choo!
LOTL 2007-07-12 ch 5, anon.	abuseWELL GOOD STORY THE LEMON IN THE END WAS OK TO YOU GET A 7/10 AND THAS GOOD FOR MY STANDARDS
Drip Dry 2007-07-06 ch 5,	abuseaw fangirl squee
HowBoutNow? 2007-07-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseAwesome story. There aren't enough good GaaSaku ones out there. I have to say, the rape thing doesn't really appeal to me often in a plot unless it really is necessary, and it usually turns me off to see it used as a simple plot device. However, its a good story, and I loved it! Especially the ending.Sidenote: One thing I'd really like to see is a good story that is centric on their relationship. Where the relationship provides plot. I've seen some in Shikatema fics where they're trying to get pregnant or have a child without trying, and I thought it would be a really good idea to explore that with GaaraSakura.
Niobe Jones 2007-04-10 ch 5,	abuseI really liked it! The smut was well done and I liked that you showed some of the exploration that goes on in it. Just yum! And as much as I feel bad for Sasuke he did ask for it. the bastard! ^_^
Soubi Shoukyaku 2006-12-23 ch 5,	abuseawesome job ^_^ i love it ^_^
Ravenseye131 2006-12-10 ch 5,	abuseMarvelous! One of my favorite couples in such a grand story! hugs thank you for such literary genius. :)

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