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monkey-101
2009-09-30 . chapter 5
Great end chapter and awesome story.
Congrats on finishing.
:)monkey-101(:
Hiei's Cute Girl
2009-06-05 . chapter 5
Gaara, a sqirrel, and a muffin. If you include light-sabers, an overly used joke on tanuki's and squirrels and pandas, a deathly hilarious 'I AM YOUR FATHER' quote, and possibly use the muffin as a floating... something (either a ship or a would-be god would do)... I think you would start up a pretty twisted yet odd combination of crack that would ruin Gaara's reputation.

Him battling an evil squirrel with light-sabers to attain the MUFFING OF TRUTH would be, to put it short, PRICELESS.

And possibly have Sakura with a couple of cinnamon buns stuck to her head... (just saw the 'double' trilogy and it's here to stay, I'm sorry).

I loved this! Though I thought that Gaara's reaction would be FAR more violent, I LOVED THIS.

He's just so wretchedly adorable, seriously! Did I tell you I LOVED this?
kallou
2009-03-02 . chapter 5
wow
BlueSkyHeaven
2008-12-31 . chapter 5
^ ^ Brill Gaa Saku, a lil short but great descriptions~
Nyanonymous
2008-12-05 . chapter 5
wait, who had said that to her before? i like it, i just can't remember...
chow
Nyanonymous
2008-12-05 . chapter 4
chibi gaara had a bannana nut muffing... yummy stuff there... well he left it on the picnic table in the park, and when he came back it was no where to be found. angry, and wanting his muffin, gaara proceeded to smash his sand into the tree... the a flying squirrel came out of the tree, latched onto his face, and tried to rip his eyes out, but through sand armour that's rather difficult you see. gaara held the little animal after he removed it from his face. and saw the crumbs on the face of the theif! then the squirrel bit him and ran off, the rest of the whole day gaara chased that squirrel, but all he ever found of that little critter was his banana nut muffin wrapper... it's not really a story, but that was a very interesting moment of my life... i want my three minutes back...
Nyanonymous
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
I like your Gaara. Your Sakura though, seems like something horrible has happened to her. It's good and all, but that's the only bad think I could find
chow
blissful trinity
2008-11-05 . chapter 5
Haha, from just a lil encounter like that. Gaara is hooked for life.. Cute! Good luck on future works!
darkness engulfs me
2008-09-17 . chapter 5
Quite enthralling, I like your style and I L.O.V.E. this story.
MarauderGirl777
2008-05-25 . chapter 5
Amazing story, I absolutely adored the lemon. It was great.
Thanks for writing this luvverly piece.
Wonderful grammar, blah, blah, blah.
Also, great plot, and I love this couple.
I'd love to read a sequel to this. xD
Triste1
2008-05-09 . chapter 5
M, it was terribly lovely and I enjoyed it a lot. It's rare for me to find Gaara/Sakura fics that are short and sweet, and with good diction! I love some of the ones out there to death, but the length either kills me, proverbially, after a long day at work and school or the gramatical errors simply leave my mind screaming. Sometimes, it sucks to have had good English teachers who scared grammatical correctness into our wee, innocent minds while they could.

The characters were done splendidly. Sakura still had spunk but you gave her enough depth to still be who she is while Gaara was wonderuflly portrayed, emotion-wise. I really enjoyed that part. Oh, and the character interaction was lovely. It was the first fic where Uchiha Sasuke (with Orochimaru possessing him) actually died in a confrontation with Gaara and Sakura that I can remember. And I really liked that! Not that I'm anti-Sasuke, it's just so rare for me to read a plot where Orochimaru actually took over the kid. Naruto and Kakashi were also very delightful side characters in this fic. Ah, a fatherly Kakashi--now that's something nice to picture.

There were a few minor grammatical errors about the place, but nothing that left my mind screaming, thank goodness. Just look out for them in future; minor little things like additional commas in certain places and in the first chapter some missing spaces between words.

Keep writing and best of luck with future fics!
dragon_fly
2008-01-31 . chapter 5
LOVED IT! Although, I think the ending came a little suddenly, but its your story, so you can write it how you like!
MC25
2008-01-18 . chapter 5
There were lemons yes, but the story was still above decent, it was well written, and even the sex scene was tastefully done. I really enjoyed this! :D
Sakuraangel1327
2007-12-30 . chapter 4
So did he end up raping her or not? Or did Sasuke/Orochimaru get stopped in time by Gaara... MY SAVIOUR. lmao, ;) please tell me.
-delicate.desires
2007-12-23 . chapter 5
That was such a cute story! :) Awh.
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