ch.7 2nd line of lacus' "...hell" she would say hell?

lol after reading the first chapter i thought , yep definitely a girl writing this XD.

overall it was really sweet and nice to read, funny at times too hehe.

i wanted/thought you were going to use meyrin and luna more, you know, protraying athrun as the girl magnet but that didnt happen aww :(.

i guess kira was the pimp :P

thanks for the read ^^ and keep writing!!

i ll go look at your other stories ^^.

That was good! It was almost PREFECT! Say, can you read my fanfic and give me your opinion? I want to know if I am doing good or not.

OMG the whole fic is AWESOME! YOU write so well even if you don't really use english so often... just correct your grammar and slight spelling errors and the fic will be PERFECT!

OMG the fic is great! Let me guess, that guy is Yuna, correct?

Seeing as you're not a native speaker of english, you have pretty good grammar and sentence formation. Keep up the good work! :D

aw... such a cute AC moment.. hahhahahha... well, onto the next chapter! xD

AAW... YAY! GO ATHRUN! ahahhaha... he FINALLY told her! in the eighth friggin chapter... lol.. xD well, hope nothing bad happened just there... Athrun should be more... ermm... iunno... not talk with meer... altho hes being nice...a rg.. i dunno... well, next chapter, here i come! xD

aw... loved the chapter... so sweet with fluffy Athrun and Cagalli moments.. hehehe.. so... next chapter! xD

yay! go Athrun! ahhahahha... and DOWN WITH MEER! THAT EVIL SOB! *ahem* well, onto the next chapter! xD

aw... hope theyll find Lacus soon.. and Athrun will find Cagalli.. lol.. bout meer... i agree that shes creepy... lol.. and miri and dearka, HAHAHAHAHHA... lol.. cant believe that miriallia slapped dearka!! hahaha... onto the next chatper xD

hahahah.. lol.. GO ATHRUN!! lol.. wel,l, great chapter!! hope Athrun will figure out that Cagalli actually likes him.. lol.. xD haha.. well, ill read more later... sry... gtg out to buya card for my friend's bday tmrw...

oh... TO HELL WITH YUUNA! HOPE HE BURNS IN HELL! I HOPE THAT ATHRUN WILL COME AND SAVE CAGALLI!! hahhahah.. hmm.. so im guessing that Athrun likes Cagalli..? lol.. hahaa... cant beleive the guys did that to the girls.. thats justb pervisha dn wrong.. lol.. glad they hasd their revenge!! hahaha.. well, ontot the next chapter! xD

lkol.. nice strat... hahaa... i can imagine how Lacus would feel.. lol.. it IS really creepy.. lol.. well, ontot the next chapter! xD

AWW nice~ i love it! soo CUTE XD!
awesome job!

this was a great story :D and a really great ending although I hope that you plan on continuing this story because it was a really good one :)