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1derland pixie
2008-07-21 . chapter 6
nice story!
MinervaEvenstar
2006-09-14 . chapter 6
Loved it, especielly how you wrote Crawford and Schuldich!
Kasra
2005-06-20 . chapter 6
While I'm a sucker for happy endings, I prefer how you ended this -- ambiguously, with a tinge of hope for both of them, but enough baggage between the two that any resolution they eventually come to will be at the end of a long road. I'm hopeful that you'll get around to writing the sequel eventually, as it's rare that there's any good Nagi/Omi out there (much less good post-Gluhen Nagi/Omi).

Thanks for the excellent read, and I look forward to more from you in the future.
weiss kittyn
2005-06-19 . chapter 6
this was the perfect fanfic. it was funny, and serious, and sad, all at the same time, and i LOVE it. utterly. if you haven't already, i TRULY hope you get a sequel out soon! maybe...somehow Omi turns into a girl? That would be interesting. Or lost his memory. (my favorite things to do to him)
Bladderwrack
2005-05-09 . chapter 5
No matter how bizarre thier situations, the characters are so real and so human it hurts to wacth them. Brilliant, absurd and damn near heartbreaking.
Kasra
2005-04-23 . chapter 4
First things first, I really hope that revolver of Nagi's was not loaded. The poor boy (err, girl?) needs an anatomy chart and a gift certificate to Good Vibrations though if s/he thinks using a revolver was a good idea. o_O

Now onto the chapter itself. Good action, followed by the even better scene in the car with Crawford, Schuldig, Nagi, and Mamoru. I especially liked how Schuldig's impression of Mamoru shifted through the conversation, starting with the "Bastard’s not good enough for our little girl" to a respect for Mamoru's shrewdness and intelligence (though likely still not thinking he's good enough for Nagi). I'd feel bad for Rex getting stranded except that I was too amused by how Crawford and Schuldig went about it.

Anyhow, loved this chapter and am still loving this fic. Can't wait to read more!

(and if you're curious about the influx of reviews - well, to be honest, I'd been catching up with about two months' worth of fics on when I ran across your story. I mentioned it to a couple of friends, but I don't think any of them have left reviews...)
Bladderwrack
2005-04-19 . chapter 4
omigawd dude you updated! *hugs* X3. Seriously, this is so good. Real UST without angsty monologues, random kisses or the protagonists staring longingly into each others' eyes. Schuldig's as ** funny as ever. I love the way Nagi thinks and acts like a teenage boy - even if he isn't, technically. Can't wait to read the rest.
Self Inflicted
2005-04-16 . chapter 4
I've forgotten how much I love this fandom and why you're one of my favourite writers (waiting for Once Upon A Nightmare is killing me! but reading this fic brings all the warm fuzzy memories back! Is it just my overwhelming need to see Brad and Schu pair off are is there something going on? *nudge nudge wink wink* anyway hope to see the rest of the fic up soon!
Bladderwrack
2005-04-16 . chapter 2
“When did my common sense get so dependant on caffeine?” XD *hugs*. aww, so adorable. The characterisation here is fantastic, they seem so real. Nice to find an Omi/Nagi Gluehenfic, their character designs were so much better in that series, imho, and their relationship can be more plausible and more mature. It doesn't look like this fic is going to be finished, but I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading it.
Kasra
2005-04-12 . chapter 3
I have to admit, I had some trepidation going into reading this fic. I'm not a fan of gender-change stories as a general rule, but I decided to take a chance on this one because I recognized your name as someone who's written excellent Weiss Kreuz fanfiction in the past, to the extent that one of your fics is archived on my Gluhen fanfiction site. I am happy to say that far from being disappointed, I'm really pleased with how you've handled Nagi's change, and the hints you've given about the reason(s) behind it. I'm excited by this fic and I can't wait to read more of it. If I could even be so bold, I'd like to ask to archive it on Glowing Cross if you'll let me, even in its currently-unfinished state.

Thanks for the wonderful read so far - I'm definintely looking forward to more!
Grasshopper
2005-03-16 . chapter 3
Random thought: female, Gluhen-style Nagi would be like another Noin (Gundam Wing).

I really, -really- like Nagi-chan's definition of "horny."

Hehehe, Crawford and Schuldich are acting like Nagi's parents. Well, okay, Schu-Schu is just his stepmom, but still... *has been reading too much of Viridian5's "Glass Houses"*
Grasshopper
2005-03-16 . chapter 2
*giggles* Poor Nagi-chan, not knowing how to deal with the difference in his body's urges now, kukuku...
Grasshopper
2005-03-16 . chapter 1
Girl!Nagi - I love it! ^_^ And I thought that I was the only one who was thinking of writing that. *looks at partially-written fic* Only what I'm working on is Brad x Schuldich x Nagi.

Much happiness for the genderbending! And female Nagi! I was getting to think that only Aya or Omi were gonna be turned into girls in fic...
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