Hi there! This story is really sad... I hope it worked out well with your fiancée!
Here's my critique:
I loved the way you led Bakura and Malik to fight, though I hate Bakura for hurting Malik! The Deathshipping scene was perfect, I reall love that pairing! And the ending is so cute and sweet, I can't stop re-reading it!
But you shouldn't have packed the songtext in one spot but parted it over the whole story... would've got a greater effect because I myself noticed that I skipped some passages...
Still well done! I loved it!

mfG
Lolchen

*sniff* It was heart breakingly beautiful! ;_; ^^ Especially if you're listening to sigur Rós while reading this fic. Equally stunning indeed! I was literally in tears reading this fanfic! Very angsty!

You did an excellent job, and once again, poor Malik D: *starts hugging him* Damn Bakura! He can be a sexy, heartless bastard sometimes! But luckly the ending is not very sad! ^3^

Tops! =D :3

It was so good I cried and read it over ten times. Seriously. Keep up the good work!

Omg. This is so amazing. You're a wonderful writer. You did such a great job of keeping them in character!! I love it. =)

That was beautiful, it nearly made me cry T_T

It's not good at all! It's GREAT!!

That was SO noce! OMG, made me get all teary eyed ... 10/10, it ROCKS!

Aw...It's so sad. Great writing, especially details and feelings. I'm not sure quite why, but I needed a story like that. Wow...you have amazing talent. I don't doubt that made some of the weaker at heart cry. Keep up the great work. I'm putting this on favorites!

That made me cry! Stupid Bakura. Being so mean.

Stupid Malik. Being so rash.

Although I wailed like a big baby, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very well-written!

I loved it! It kind of reminds me of what I went through not to long ago...