absolutely one of my most favorite Charmed stories. brilliant writing, brilliant story, brilliant everything. loved it!

I loved this story, it worked perfectly, no nagging unanswered questions. nice family dynamic, great OC's and a heartwarming ending. Special notice for the amazing spells, the rhyme and metrum were very good.

i know that this story is old but i would like to say that thiss a very good story. very good writting. thank you for altering the season. it was definetly better then the real one. thank you!! ^_^

~Kellogmonkey ^_^

Just... Wow. This story is great. I can't say that it's often that I actually cry from a story but I was in tears, as terribly embarressing as that is.

Thank you for this story! It is lovely. Just one suggestion, if you ever look at these things: you use "pressurized" twice when I think you meant "pressured." Just a thought. But the entire story is great and I loved the ending where Chris gets to see what he's missed and gets to be a whole person.

Amazing Story!!
It even made me cry!
I swear if you ever write a book, I would totally buy it!!

That was a very good read. Quality entertainment lol. I liked your change in who turns Wyatt evil, Gideon always ** me off. I also liked how you combined the two Chrises, oh and the addition of Prue. Overall good job, I'm going to go and check out more of your work =)

love it so far

I loved this. It was beautifully writen. Not to mention that it was different than all the other Chris going to the past to save Wyatt fics I've read yet.
~Shelbey~

aww wicked ending! its an interesting twist to time travel stories merging two souls! i really enjoyed reading this story and it took the better part of my weekend but it was so worth it! the characters are so realistic! it unbelievable great job!

o.k i wasn't going to review till i finished this story but i just couldn't wait every chapter makes me cry especially this one. its one of the best charmed fic i've read so far. i really hope chris and leo connect!

interesting

I loved this story!It was simply amazing!
I loved how you altered the relationship between Leo and Chris!And how they were and still are so close to each other!I also loved how,even though he was evil,Wyatt's weak spot was still his brother!And the fusing between the two Chrises(sp?) went!The way that their weaknesses combined made them stronger as one!But speacially how you made Chris almost as powerful as Wyatt!I always believed that Chris didn't use the totallity of his powers when he went to the past for fear of changing the future!
Loved it!

Love it POOR CHRIS lol his reaction was ow thats sounds like him

This was a beyond awesome story!
It was also one of the first times I've seen an author make the original future's Leo good instead of a complete **, so that was cool.