If I were Alexander, I wouldn't tell Olympias about Hephaestion. She may end up wanting to try that out.

Tender, erotic even. I love the sensuality between the two. Both of their POVs and emotions are so strong. Its beautiful *teary eyed* and that's the point. Yep, Hephaestion was a gift from the gods. A very hot one that Alexander should never leave. He should have just stayed in bed and forgot about Persia, *smile and wink*, great job. Keep it up!

~Baliansword

this is good. I like it. You should write more.

go!go!go! i'm a great fan of yaoi(boy-to-boy love) and i just love your work...please continue on writting on this piece 'cause i'd really like to read your version of the love bet. alexander and the gorgeous Hephaestion..
keep up the good work!

*le sigh* So so beautiful. Made my heart go all war and fluttery.

This this this was so sweet. Adored it. How Alexander took care of Phai and how much he loved Hephastion.

Oh my dear.. thank you, thank you.. I love every bit of it.. so romantic and full of feeling.. I knew you weren't gonna simply leave it out! Thank you so much.. I love your writings.

*cries* Wonderful! I love them... you did really well. Of course I kept picturing them in Babylon, not Macedonea. Oh well.

Love to see it finally pop up here. Nice title (*little wink*).

Aye, i agree with Nelia here.

This is simply amazing. You have a gift for words!

How do you do it? How do you find such word, they are simply devine and I could not help but whipe away some stray tear...

That was simply great and so sweet when Alexander washed hephaistion 'clean'. And you portrayed hephaistions feelings so well, I could almost feel it myself...

Great stuff!

Nelia