This seems like a very promising start. It's a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long.

Dark and oh, so dark, perfect!

love ur story but where is update we need one :)

Hey, girly! Its AMy, AKA RootbeerFloat! OMG I miss you! E-mail my friend and I'll get her e-mail and write you back that way. majicpenguin137 @ hotmail . com. K? If you cant e-mail me that way, just review one of my stories and talk to me that way. The friend's name is Josie, and I'll be looking at her e-mail every time I come over to see if I have something from you. I miss you sarah. OMG My boyfriend Johnny is a football player, tall, lean muscles, black hair, tan, hasel eyes, sweet, charming, kinky, and likes the color green... I think I'm in love... well, I am. I've been dating him for 4 months. ANyways, e-mail me, girl! I MISS YOU.

Love you 4 ever

Amy
AKA
The infamous
rootbeerfloat

oh, draco says hi!

that was a great chapter you really need to update soon or i just might die! j/k but really this story is awesome you 2 need to update asap! keep up the good work and remeber keep writing!

While waiting for Amy to finish writing her other stories I decided to see what this one was about. I really like the story because its a very different kind of DHr. Frayed-Hope you are excellent at writing a good amount of detail and Amy you are just always involved in well written stories. You are both very good writers. Don't worry about what anyone says about your grammar or spelling mistakes. Everyone's a critc. Keep up the good work you two!

Omgd. That's horrible! Horrible horrible horrible! Not your writing, I mean, but what Hermione's step-dad does to her! He's evil...
Good first chapter! I'll have to read more!

intrigued cant wait for the revisions along with the new chapters

hope you update soon

yall havent updated in forever ahh im dying please update i love this story before... and its hardly started going! i hate it when people just say update but im getting desperate lol so UPDATE!... *mumbles "three months"*

What a bastard uh? The story is really good so far, and like I stated in my last reviews, I think you both are pretty good authors. Up date soon.
Nikki
Ps. Hope something good, or at least decent will happen to both Hermione and Draco.

Just when I started to feel bad for Draco...

Hmm. Draco's mom comes off to sound a little whimpy. Well great job with this chapter. And has far as I can tell you both are great authors.

Wow. How sad. But where is Hermione's real father? Did he die or something? Hmm. At any rate, good story so far, I can't wait to read the rest of the chappys.

hi idk if ive reviewed for this before bc i havent been on fanfiction in the longest time but good job bc i like thsi story

a fan