 HorseTechie 2/23/05 . chapter 1Oh. wow. That was well done.
I loved this episode (in Superlink), due to how profound it was overall. But the way you wrote it from an Omnicon's POV was great.
Only one detail of difference, not that it would change anything... but Ironhide had powerlinked with Jetfire to fly higher into the sky to make the shot. (unless... Energon changed that) |