I found this a very enjoyable story! If the Sequel Muse should happen to stop by, give her a listen.

I love this story. I was very much welcome a sequel, perhaps even an Inuyasha crossover. Maybe have Ranma and the NWC help Kogame and Inuyasha out of a bit of serious demon trouble. Just a thought...hint hint!

Great fic! I definitely like making Ranma a Final Fantasy addict, especially FFT. One thing that you never really explained was why Kyoko would leave on a training trip with Akane. Yeah, it's not a big leap to assume that Akane's a lesbian, but Kyoko could honestly see it as a training trip.

The story is pretty good so far. The things that seemed a bit odd to me were. Genma's reaction seems to depart from cannon characterisation, which is well not that big of a deal. More interesting is this apparent acceptance of half demon characteristics in Ranma. I would have thought it would have caused more of a reaction. The dynamics where Shampoo and Ukyo and Mouse seem odd, but perhaps it will make more sense later.

Perhaps I missed something in the Shampoo arc. I don't follow why Cologne is in China and the others in Nerima. Then again I have been known to read quickly.

great fic

Beauitiful story to bad it had to come to an end but you were right when you said just because it isn't long doesn't mean it isn't good. I look forward to reading your other works.

fun stuff

Great story, I very much enjoyed the first meeting between Ranma and his sister and the relation ship it produces.

Kyokos view on Ranmas life is very well written and her reactions to various Fiancées is very amusing.

I also thoroughly enjoyed the fight scenes until the very last one. A lot was going on in the final battle but I do think it was a bit short and the ending a bit abrupt.

Over all a very good Story well written and very entertaining.
Thank you for writing this story.

you have alot of potetial. you paint a interesting picture and give good detail on what you talk about. you need to work on explaining more.. the story is a little shallow, and needs to go more in depth. why did ranma take kyoko home? which home did he go to? why did he go? what made him follows these decisions.

all in all an interesting start. but because of the sudden choices that change the ranma cannon, your characters seem OOC. it is also hard to follow because it jumps around a little. but a very good start in what will hopefully be a good story if you can make some corrections.

kazu

you have alot of potetial. you paint a interesting picture and give good detail on what you talk about. you need to work on explaining more.. the story is a little shallow, and needs to go more in depth. why did ranma take kyoko home? which home did he go to? why did he go? what made him follows these decisions.

all in all an interesting start. but because of the sudden choices that change the ranma cannon, your characters seem OOC. it is also hard to follow because it jumps around a little. but a very good start in what will hopefully be a good story if you can make some corrections.

kazu

Very nice fic. It was really original in a lot of ways. Congratulations.
Yeah, girl days was a nice fic really. Guess what? I thought about it while reading Happosay's destiny here. Lol!
I really liked the Soun/ Nodoka pairing.
Well, ja ne!

Good story. I liked it!

GREAT CHAPTER! Nice ending.

Glad to see a happy ending, as well as Ranma with the possibility of being a father four times over.

The penguin thing was a nice touch. I am surprised that Ling-Ling and Lung-Lung survived the village assault, but they do consider Cologne family so they may have left ebfore things got bad.

I look forward to your next series.

Innortal

Kyoko and Akane? Not expected, but I look forward to seeing how they develope. I guess Nabiki won't be selling photos of either of Ranma's forms anymore, since she has to share with Kasumi. I hope Ryoga gave Mikado a kick in the nards at the very least, the poor former lost boy didn't deserve to have to see something like that.