chapter 2 was certainly short

You did a bang-up job on chapter one. As for subsequent chapters; how about a variation of "the Wish?" The Master has killed Buffy, so Dawn becomes an orphan. Lois and Clark become her foster parents. And, that means Glory comes to Metropolis!

good start... now lets see if I have any ideas... I'm kinda new to buffy, but I know Lois and Clark, so don't shoot me for any mistakes. I can't think of any specific plot ideas, but I do have suggestions. Each lead character (Buffy, Clark) has their own strengths and weaknesses. Perhaps a vampire thats got its cold little hands on some kryptonite? And getting Lois in trouble is always so much fun. And its gotta have Spike. :)

Have Lois get abducted by Dracula, so he can lure Superman into a trap, munch on him, and become Slayer-proof.

Actually, Zantac's idea isn't such a bad one. You could have Drusilla successfully vampirize Xander, and (in revenge) Spike tries to vampirize a similarly-smitten Lois!

please tell me that you are going to continue with this.

You got to write more it a good start but i want more

That last sentence sounds like an MGM song. And, might I point out that Lois and Clark DID meet the ghost of their current domicile's former resident? Anyway, I like the basic concept. How about setting chapter two during "Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered?" I can just see Superman spotting Lois running after Xander, and frying the latter's butt with some heat vision!

A good start but it needs more.

Oooh! I love an LnC/BtVS crossover! Continue please! Put all those Metropolis references on Buffy to good use!

Looks like a promising start! More soon?

hey are u going to continue? It would be interesting to see spike vamp lois or something than lock Superman up in his crypt(chained to a block of kryptonite of course) muwhahahahaha

This could be an interesting concept. I await to see what you do with this idea. Superman is, somewhat, vulnerable to magic. Could a vampire, if not kill him, feed off him? Can they 'digest' Kryptonian blood? This is definitely a 'fic I will start to track. Hope you have more soon -Igor-

I'm reviewing it!

N seriously, I like. I uploaded it and checked thru the grammar etc. I like. One word of warning...YOU HURT SPIKE AND YOU SHALL REGRET IT! YOU WILL BE ON TOP OF TINA'S LIST AND MINE AT THAT! Okaaaaay, glad to get that out om system. I'll see you 2morro, hun. Mwah, mwah dahling! **walks off, sharpening axe**