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Tetsiaga 2006-01-27 ch 6,	abuseGREAT CHAPTER:) keep it up
Newbie GK 2006-01-18 ch 6,	abuseDon't be so hard on yourself. Us readers need to see into the characters' minds so we can understand the reasoning behind their actions. This chapter excelled in doing just that. I especially enjoyed reading Inuyasha's thoughts vs Kagome's because they contrasted quite nicely. You did a great job! I look forward to reading the next chapter.
EmeraldoftheFlame 2006-01-17 ch 6,	abuseIt took you a while to update, huh? ^^ It's a great story, really, and I'd like to see where it goes! And yes. Inuyasha is quite annoying to write, but...he's just so damn cute! X3 ~Em
Madame Band Geek 2006-01-17 ch 6,	abuseDon't be too hard on yourself. Loved the whole effing females thing. Twas cool. Nice addtion. Take your time. I have midterm exams. dies -animeobessed3191
Black Betty 2006-01-16 ch 6,	abusevery nice! I'm so glad you upated! Keep up the fantastic work!
DamagedDreamer 2006-01-16 ch 6,	abuseLOL damn inuyasha huh? i find it funny people say that its like after a while the become tierd of always knowing what inuyasha will do. Oh he'll get happy over this, or grouchy over that, they seem to be able to know what he will do next. the thing is they forget he is a character in your story. when you put him in your story he is no longer the inuyasha you know and love on tv he is someone you can mold to fit the role you want. if you want him to be that lovable litte fuzzy dog ear boy he can be, if you want him to be like sesshomaru he can be. thats the wonderful thing about writing it shouldn't matter what other people think it's what you think! thats the freedom of it all to be able to escape having to be like everyone else. if everyone wrote him to be the same character after a while it would become very boring indeed. By the way i love your story just remember to make it your own. Reviews do count for something but its your own review that counts the most! Always, AngelMaiden
Tiamath 2005-10-06 ch 5,	abuseAngsty, but good. :D
Reillusioned 2005-09-28 ch 5,	abuseYour writing style HAS changed. Not much though. Gah, who cares about these two? Yes yes, tangled romance, they'll get together at the end, in the meantime lots of Kagome being forward and InuYasha being stupid. We know, we know! Get to the Youkai council already! : D Oh, and go check my thing. Updates! Whoo!
Black Betty 2005-09-26 ch 5,	abuseI am so happy that you updated! That makes me smile with glee!! It was a wonderful chapter, but I must say there are a few things I want to say about it that might not seem so wonderful...actually, they aren't really bad at all...(sorry I'm babbling). Anywho, just the way it was written, like the sentences structures and such, made it kind of difficult to read. It just didn't really flow that well even though you did have a great idea for this chapter. I just thought I would tell you that in hopes that you won't kill me and just take it as friendly advice. -BB
Madame Band Geek 2005-09-25 ch 5,	abuseattacks Ryuu YOU UPDATED! encases teh updatetah in hug of death OOh, you're right, it has changed. In a good way. This chapter... was pleasingly weird. I enjoyed reading it. ^^ Is'good. Happy for updaters- animeobsessed3191
Newbie GK 2005-09-24 ch 5,	abuseI think your writing style has greatly improved and I enjoyed this new chapter. It shows the fact that people have more than just physical needs like food, they also need to feel enjoyment, companionship, and as if they have a purpose. Great job!
Cervantes1026 2005-09-24 ch 5,	abuseGreat story keep updating it.
Kaichai 2005-07-02 ch 1,	abuseVery nice!
Black Betty 2005-05-01 ch 4,	abuseThis fanfic is going really well...I can't wait until you update again and I hope it is a longer chapter.
DamagedDreamer 2005-04-30 ch 4,	abusegreat job! please up date this story soon! thanks! angel

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