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| KimiKeiko 2005-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseis that all? sounds very amusing, i want to see what you do with it. please update within like the next year or so. :) . : KimiKeiko : . |
| Goyomon 2005-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseSmall world, ne? The GB at that shrine is going to close soon-- better get in any last immature crap before it closes because we all know that you'd never email someone personally to leave explictives. By the way, your character is a Mary Sue from hell. The characters are mostly out of character. Don't use random Japanese in an English fan fiction other than Proper nouns like Tokyo (a city in Japan) or Minamino Shuuichi (a name). |
| Sakura Sango 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat prologue! now I can't wait for the story, update soon again!! |
| Twilight's Shadow 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseGREAT BEGINNING, AS ALWAYS! I just have one thing to say though: Yusuke: Idiot Kurama: Scary Kuwabara: ...KITTIES!! Okay, I'm done...UPDATE SOON! |
| Servant of Grimmjow 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWHAT DID YOU DO TO KURAMA!? |
| Time and Fate 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abusewow... techers hating kurama...i mean really...WOW IT'S THE APOCALYPS! |
| ???????????????????? 2005-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's the nickname I have for Domon from G Gundam. |
| Katzztar 2005-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseo.O Perhaps you should call this a silly-fic instead of Bash fic?? It would turn less people away... Still thank you about the warning of the treatent of Kuwabara. So far, I can't really call this a bash-fic. Yous said there would be some redeeming qualities... a true bash-fic would have none of that. 1- They make the despised character completely out of character, exaggerate the bad qualities and refuse to admit any good qualities 2- They treat the liked characters opposite, admitting no bad traits and blowing good one WAY up. So far I see Kuwabara, Yusuke And Kurama being treated in the same vein- very silly. I tried to look for the tell-tale signs of a Basher... A few times I THOUGHT I picked a clue up- such as Yusuke being responcible-only to read the next sentence that makes fun- responcible for the trouble If the rest of the fic makes fun of them in this same vien, then even as a Kuwabara fan I could enjoy it. I like Kuwabara's charachter,I admit that not olny is he honorable, but the class-clown too. I'll wait to see how this will turn... |
| LoveableLittleSock 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseYou really changed the story...oh well! The story must go on! Wait.. isn't it show...? Whatever. Update! |
| hieiluver213 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abusesounds good so far...please continue! |
| darksaphire 2005-02-23 ch 1, | abusefunny introduction...lol |