AH! Hermione I though you were smarter than that!! Go Ron!! lol, usually he's so dense and insensitive. Finally, he does something right. e, happy ending! yeah RXH!!

once again, you're too cool for words. Though, with your talent, you can probably come up with a few ;P

ToriMiu

My soul belongs to Kakashi. One day, he'll be the death of me. Not that I'm complaining ;PP

wow, that was great

o.O

I'm not a fan of Ron/Hermione but this was just... whoa!

Consider yourself good. *Thumbs up*

Great story, I loved the changing between Ron and Hermione. Totally fantastic!

~Sierra

Hey GinJen Lurve this story, so you're back to reading ah? You may want to check out "The Final Team" cause well, you anted to read it, and I need reviews! Lurve this story! So sad!

OKAY OKAY! That is very well written...really...truly...but, what's with the end? Honestly...why would she go through all of that? It makes no since...that is not Hermione! But it's a great story, don't think I'm saying anything bad about it, I'm not...I'm just confused about certain parts of it and whatnot.

brilliant...excellent use of symbolism...this is one of the best stories i've read in a long,long time...keep up the great work =D

This is amazing... i LOVE the simbolism in this story. I can't honestly say i've read a story like it. Its so amazing... you're very talented, keep it up!

That was intense. Very well written, but so dramatic. I'm glad you ended it the way you did. How in the world did he get there in time? haha, I guess because it's fiction, but I'm very impressed. Keep writing! :)

okay even with the explanation that was still wicked confusing...and even the explanation was confusing!

Well, as a High School English teacher, I woul,d like to congradulate you on your use of figurative lanuage. Your plot was thin, but I suppose since this was one scene, the plot wasn't as important as the emotions. My only thing is don't kill the wandering mind by explaining yourself in the end. YOu don't need to tell us what the "cliff" was or when you used personnification, I knew immeadiately. Good Luck
mrs. l.

hey, great story. It was very captivating, however I can't say that I do not wish it was not Fan Fiction. . .Still, fantastic job ;)

This was pretty good. I liked how descriptive you were with the emotions and such. I just think it would be better if you used their names instead of "BOY" and "GIRL"... but that's just me. This is bone-chilling, but very well written.

it was pretty good. but i don't see why it would be confusing...? it was, actually, pretty obvious

Is she still alive now? Pretty please? I think she is! (frowns) SO THERE!! I like this. I was afraid it would be a HPHG and I absolutely detest those. I thought that it was a HPGW one at first, but I guessed that t was Hermione at the homework part. That was when I thought it would be HPHG. :) Write more or I shall force you to huggle my pet mutant, rabid weasle. His name is Billy. :)

ugrade cuz this is good...put longer chapter next time