I'm really enjoying reading through your stories and this one was no exception... you're really good at flashbacks and most of the time you're pretty good with characterisation too. As much as I understand why Ecklie would refuse Sara the acting-supervisor job, I do wish that he hadn't because I would love to have seen a sequel where she had that job... maybe you could write a different fic with that theme? You're so good at writing Sara-centric stories.

I finally finished reading this story. Took me long enough. I really enjoyed it. I think you have the characters' personalities down quite well, and the story flowed nicely. The case was interesting, and it worked the G/S beautifully. Thanks.

Thanks for another great story. You are an awesome writer.

Great ending.

Awesome fic!!

Awesome story! Loved the way you went back and forth between the past and present. Very believable characterizations. Great ending, sepecially loved the last line.

I loved this story, especially the backstory and the twist where Townsend really wasn't the murderer . . .

And such a lovely ending, too:
“I want you here”.
“I know”, she murmured softly, lightly caressing his arm. She leant against the crook of his neck, soft hair tickling his chin. “And I’ll be here when you wake up”.

*sighs happily* :)

Very nice. It really could've gone either way, and I wasn't predicting anything.
Excellent story, and I'm glad that Nick gave Sara the push she needed to go look for that resolution.
Man, when people assume... *shakes head*
-}-@
Krys

You've melted me into a happy little puddle. That story rocked -- Great character development and insight, and I really enjoyed the element of mystery you created with the slow reveal on Grissom and Sara's history with Alex. Thanks!

Very good chapter! Perfect ending! Bravo!

Very good-I like your realistic approach to Sara's feelings-and the way that worm Alex made Gris realize a few things.

Great story-looking forward to more of your work!

Wow, this was a great story, from finish to end. :P I love the whole idea of it, and the way you handled it. I also have to say I love the ending a lot; it works. I have to say you did a great job keeping everyone in character - especially Catherine, when she was mothering Grissom. Way to go; now you just have to finish a certain other story. What do you say? Do we have a deal? ;)

This story was great. I loved it. Your an awesome writer. It was a great ending. I am looking forward to reading more of your fics.
~Jackie~

I really liked this story... so sad to see it end!

I am so looking forward to the next chapter of Trial of the Heart, I'm ridiculously hooked on that one.

Great job!

So it takes Griss getting shot, to realize whats in front of him? Hm, well done, you rounded out this story nicely, and I am glad to see animostiy still lingering between Griss and Townsend. I still don't like the worm. You have created a truely dislikeable character with Townsend, well done. My only wish is that I could write as exquisitely as you do! Sad to see C&E come to a close, but I am looking forward to what you have in store for us next. Oh yeas and love the last line

"And I'll be here when you wake up." So simple and yet so well put. Again Well Done.